Reviews for Embittered
Poet Lordy chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
“Embittered”

A wonderful opening verse, I almost felt imprisoned within it, your customary flow and expertise.

Your second verse has my mind dancing, I always look beyond and within, this verse has all of that for me but I’ll spare you my rambling.

You seem to pack so much meaning into your work, the time it must take for you to feel it’s just right is incalculable for me. I seem to see endless pieces from you that just deliver excellence; this is just such a piece.

I would truly go to the ends of the earth to find and purchase your work, for I know when that day comes, it will be a special day indeed. And although I know part of this is not what you seek, to a reader such as me it would be purchase to hold dear.

Mark.