Reviews for The Cycle of Time
Imperio chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
It made me smile. I understand you completly. I like the meaning that is potrsyed. Keep writing poems- you're good at them.
dark-fire-rebel chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
You might wanna proof read your poem again, it has some minor errors. Other than that, I loved the message behind the poem! Amazing job!
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Great poem :) Some of the lines don't make complete sense (Or the greater of good?) but otherwise the language is really good, and the meaning behind the piece is very clear.