Reviews for The Myriad Calamities of Luke LaChance
Misty Rius chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
This is a really interesting story, and I like the way you used phrases like "weeping crimson" to create imagery. The only problem I really have with this chapter is that for the beginning of Mary Fortune's intro, you called her "Miss Fortune" and then all of a sudden called her "Mary."

That's all I really have to say for now. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Keep Writing,

Misty