Reviews for The Myriad Calamities of Luke LaChance
santosjudy437 chapter 1 . 4/25
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
JustChen chapter 1 . 3/31
I like how the story was presented. Good job writer!

If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or

I also suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
Misty Rius chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
This is a really interesting story, and I like the way you used phrases like "weeping crimson" to create imagery. The only problem I really have with this chapter is that for the beginning of Mary Fortune's intro, you called her "Miss Fortune" and then all of a sudden called her "Mary."

That's all I really have to say for now. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Keep Writing,

~Misty