|Reviews for Wand (ワンド)|
| MissKluck chapter 26 . 9/5/2013
Ah, it can't stop now! I have to know what'll happen to Hikaru and Shiori, and also to all the others in the ballroom! I can't wait another week! Oh, now I know how my readers feel, but I just update once a month... Poor them... O:)
Anyway, you did as splendid as always, Sora is still awesome, even though she seemingly has no idea what she's doing and also that Sayuri and Hinata is finally out of the spell. Also Shou is out of his ice block, yeey and hopefully he won't get a cold or something from it :) I really look forward to the next chapter then, and hope that there might be some Hikaru and Sora kicking ass as well :P Though, Hikaru has to get better first, 'cause I won't allow you to kill him! Not Ryuu for that matter either... I'm overreacting a bit now, but let's just conclude that your story is so good it's making me overreact, we'll say that :)
| MissKluck chapter 25 . 9/2/2013
I found out why I hadn't noticed your new update; since I had favorited it, I didn't get information about when it was updated. Oh well, I noticed it by chance just now and read it. And I have to say it is still as good as ever! I must admit that I am really shipping the relationships of Hikaru and Sora and also Ryuu and Hinata, though the first is kind of more shipped than the other, if you get what I mean. I felt that this was such a short chapter, but I guess it's because of the action making it seem shorter than it really is. Anyway, I look forward to your next update in anticipation, as always, do your best! :)
| silently chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Daaang. I found this story sometime in 2012, and then I couldn't find it, and now I've found it again. I'm so happy to see that there are more chappies now! Please excuse me as I go ahead and read them all. 3
| sophie19114 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
I think your writing is amazing! It just flows together. I wish I could write like this:( I can't wait to read the rest of the story!
| Anju chapter 24 . 8/19/2013
Pleaaase update soooooon! I love it :D
| MissKluck chapter 24 . 8/3/2013
As always I love your story and have been waiting and hoping for this chapter for a while now. In fact I had been anticipating it for so long that I didn't notice that it had actually been updated, weird, I know. :P Anyway, I am as fond of your story as ever and think that you're doing a really great job! I have to admit that you got me fooled for a moment with Hikaru and Sora and I actually believed that Hikaru was dying, but luckily that wasn't the case. I really look forward to your next update and to see how the story will be developing. Good luck! :)
| HidenoriET chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Finally read it up to here and I can tell you that the story is really interesting, along with the concept! There may be some points left unanswered up till now but the pace really sets you reading on!
Will continue and review again soon!
| HidenoriET chapter 3 . 5/22/2013
I've only started reading your work but I can definitely say that it was a nice and interesting start. I'll be following your work for now and I can't wait to get to your latest updates!
| Mizz chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
I haven't read this story in a while and I'm going to say that I like the concept. It's very interesting. One thing I noticed was that the narration style is different from what I'm used to, I felt like you repeated things that had already been said. Also, don't think you need to refer to Sora and Hikaru as "the girl" and "the boy". I'm pretty sure using "he" and "she" would have flowed better but again, that's just because it's really different from what I'm used to reading.
But this was a good chapter and I can't wait to get to the next chapter!
| xXxd chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
Yay! Almost a full chapter focusing solely on battles! They were well-written and paced well.
But I spotted more instances where you mixed present and past tense within the same sentence (I am equally guilty of this). Do proofread your chapters if you have the time to.
Reading up till this chapter, I discovered that you tend to describe the characters' features to a great length (averaging 3 sentences, around there.) I feel that it would be better if you just show 2 to 3 features of the characters that are very striking and distinct.
Definitely getting a hold of how Magic works in this story. And that's a list of affinities you have there o.o!
| xXxd chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Yay! We get to see how Magic is like in this chapter! The magic used in this were awesome, and how Sora handled her predicatment kept me thrilled! I wonder what types of magic are there in this story.
You really did a great job in weaving in those mysteries into this chapter. Things are really starting to pick up and it's turning out to be quite a thrill to read!
Can't wait to find out the true identities of the new characters (introduced in this chapter)!
| TheFreeEdge chapter 23 . 1/6/2013
All right! Hikaru's dad is here? Ass-kicking? I think so!
Aquarius... Okay. The Zodiac symbolism is strong with this one. I bet next up is Aries or Pisces or something... I like him though. He's like suave and all that and he tricked Hinata into reading his mind so he can take over hers.
Which brings the question, does he have a Wand?
Oooh boy! I want to see more of this partay!
| TheFreeEdge chapter 22 . 1/6/2013
Huh. I'm curios now. The Nether Triad would make a great plot. Something like...
"MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA MUDA! ZA WARUDO! Toki wo tomare! Soshite toki wa ugokidasu. ROAD ROLLER DA! WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!"
The controlling both Light and Darkness would also make a good villain plot. Although, it would end up looking like a rip-off of Kingdom Hearts...
"KINGDOOOOOOOOOOOOM HEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARTS! FILL ME! WITH THE POWER OF DARKNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!"
| TheFreeEdge chapter 21 . 1/6/2013
And the party don't stop till we pop in!
Ryuu's getting better characterization. He started off as a handsome lech but the way he reacted about Hinata definitely shows that he likes her or something. SHIP SHIP SHIP!
Hikaru. One does not simply keep one's phone on silent. One does not simply not feel the phone vibrate. Sheesh.
All right! Party crashed and let the REAL party begin!
| xXxd chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
Woah, I certainly did not expect this turn of events! Sora's really getting on Hikaru's nerves at almost every instance they meet.
Just how big of a cast you have for this story o.o? At least for now, I could still keep track of their names and their distinct personality and appearance.
Anyways, it seemed like Hikaru, Shou and Sayuri have got important roles to play in this story. (Just making guesses.)
"She shoved a chopsticks full of rice on her mouth when she noticed someone wearing blue rush around the hall." - I think it should be "rushed" here?
""Sorry, Sagane-sensei", Sayuri said, as she scratched her head." - the comma is outside of the inverted commas XD.
Slightly more mistakes in this chapter. But overall, I liked the flow and the plot for this chapter. Do proofread your chapters if you have time, and keep up the good work! :D