Reviews for Vulnerable
bethiee chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
First of all, thank you for reviewing my poem 'Year after Year'.

I always return reviews, and after reading a few of your poems this one stood out to me the most. I really like the rhyme how it's quite spread out to start with and then comes together at the end. You're a really good writer.
Elenive chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I thought I'd return your kind review. I know exactly the feeling you describe, but I feel that the bolded and italicized words almost detract from the power of the words.

I think it's a very good start, though perhaps a little more is needed.