Reviews for The Culture of the Desert
barfuss chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
A beautiful poem! I don't know what else to say because it simply is that: beautiful. I love the words and rhythm. And the content. Though I have to read it once more to fully capture it I think...

Thanks for uploading and sharing!

_.o0 barfuß 0o._
Louis Denair chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Ah, I recently watched Lawrence of Arabia. Needless to say, this brought back good memories. The language you use is very archaic, stilted even, but it supports itself, especially here it reminds me of a wise sage speaking. The theme itself is grand, stirring. Oddly enough, a similar 'idea' (I mean the strictly platonic hint thereof) has been buzzing in my brain. A friend from Arizona showed me pictures of the local desert and it's astounding-colorful and alive, not a desert-a garden, rather. Such is the persistence of beauty.