Reviews for Jaded
ShortcakeMattie chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
The story flowed smoothing and you convey human emotion really well. I could feel the girl's pain and longing in not being able to have what she wants. I'm guessing she's in love with a family member - a father, brother, cousin.
Ramar chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Hm...that she's sick and that she's about to die? Her life is so fragile that everyone around her believes that this will break her heart, causing an even earlier death to that expected by the whole family? Or the other way round? The guy is sick and she ain't? Or that she's a mythically magical creature that will never be able to live a normal human being's life since she is immortal and the guy is mortal, so everyone is against her falling in love with a mortal or she'd suffer heartbreak for the rest of eternity once the guy dies?... I have more guesses but I'll keep it at that... :) hope one of my guesses is right :D but I doubt it
Crystalynn chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I am guessing she's in love with someone in her family, either her father or her brother.