she is so clueless.

im going to have a heart attack

I love this story. I want to know what will happen with the band's music video. Will there be any update in the future? I hope this story won't be discontinued..

I absolutely love it! Especially the brothers' personalities. The just scream danger in front of Vance. :D Please update sooon!

so now is when the birthday party kiss is revealed?

OMFG LAUGHED MY ASS OFF! XD

It was freaking funny the last part

3 :) :) :) :)

This story is very interesting so far. :) It caught my eye because I recently started one like it (playboy guy and super nice, smiling girl). I was curious to see how your plot / characters developed.

I've been very amused while comparing your characters to mine. Tehehehe. I loved the part where Mark takes his shirt off and Elise observes him like a calculation. I can definitely see Lily (my female lead) doing something like that. Except, she'd look at it like it was a piece of art rather than something scientific.

There are a few similarities, but a lot of differences. Your girl is way different than I would have imagined making a girl, so it's been enlightening to read about her. I also love reading the male perspective. Their insight can be highly entertaining. :) I like Vance, but part of me is still rooting for Landon.

Well, I'm going to go finish reading now. :) And don't worry, I promise I won't steal your story. _

NDN

Great chapter

I love the part where when Vance tells Elise he loves her his fantasies are crushed when she stiffens.

You know, I know her brothers have the best intentions, but I find that I don't like them very much so far. All the same, I'm glad you updated- please rinse and repeat again soon! :)

I love the story line so far. I noticed some tense mixups with past a present, but otherwise it's a very awesome plot and story. Can't wait to see what her brothers do to Vance next lol.

That's not good. And wow they are such snoops. lol. What are they planning? I can't wait to see what haPpens next!

Nick andd xavier are so far from elise...they're so evil

Troubles in the horizon. I wonder what the two brothers are planning to do. Hopefully all their attempts will fail miserably. :)

Again another great chapter. I love where Nicholas and Xavier are out to get Vance. But putting Mark in there as a part of their plan was genius in my opinion. I can't wait to see what Elise's brothers found to use to their advantage. Also I really like the over almost psycho protective brothers cliche.