|Reviews for Flash Fiction|
| Dr. Self Destruct chapter 7 . 10/10/2011
Oooooh man, it wasn't until I was a few lines into this that I understood you meant she was LITERALLY wearing him, ahaha. Once I pieced that together, I shuddered and made grossed out noises. Very nice, I always love to be disgusted - especially through writing, because that doesn't happen very often.
I love the idea of them dancing together, her wearing his skin. I can just picture this demented woman prancing around by herself and hugging herself, snuggling into this coat made of human skin and... okay, I'm going to stop now. I think this might give me nightmares. Not of someone wearing me, but me wearing someone else.
I like how her motivation behind making him a coat was because he wanted to leave her, haha. Such a crazy woman... and I bet somewhere out there someone has done this before. Hmm... the urge to Google this is rising, and it makes me scared to leave the house...
This was damn creepy - perfect for Halloween. I could see this being the plot to an awesome movie.
I love how you took the prompt so literally. It's too bad you didn't submit this in time - you'd've definitely had my vote!
I found one typo:
[He tasted like honey and sweet. ]
Edit: I think you might've meant 'sweat' instead of 'sweet', but I could be wrong.
| Sophia Alexandra chapter 5 . 7/5/2011
wow. that was so sad and emotional. really good story and very well written
| Sophia Alexandra chapter 4 . 7/5/2011
| Sophia Alexandra chapter 3 . 7/5/2011
aw that was so sad!
| Sophia Alexandra chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
wow i like this. very dark
| thewhimsicalbard chapter 4 . 3/30/2011
Much like your thoughts on my piece, I like yours because it was so short. Unfortunately I caught myself glancing at the last line before I finished, which sort of wrecked the ending for me. However, looking at it as an author, you've done good work.
The only thing I would comment on is your sentence construction. At times, I feel like it becomes a little bit too repetitive, though I think you could easily fix this by eliminating some of your pronouns and putting the actual word(s) in there.
Good stuff, and thanks for your review!