Reviews for The Polis
BigStretch chapter 10 . 3/8/2017
Kind of a long shot here since this story hasn't been updated for a long time, but it seems that Chapter 10 is now just another copy of Chapter 9. So now a chunk of the story is missing between Chapter 9 and Chapter 10.
smh chapter 4 . 1/6/2015
I dont even feel sorry for her, she is a big idiot, I mean obviously these people are unstable. She doesnt know how to assess the situation and act accordingly and then have the audacity to cry when she gets slapped again. Smh. Survival of the fittest and smartest and she doesnt seem to have any survival instinct.
kamiviolet chapter 41 . 8/23/2014
Thanks for sharing such amazing story with us :)

I was just starting the first chapter, published in few years ago, but now I just finished the latest chapter! I really love Dustin and I also like Gustavo. Jessica is a bit emotional sometimes but still she is quite lovely and I understand she is not in the normal circumstances but is kidnapped to make her doing all these! Seems that after these 40 and more chapters, there are still many mysteries not found out by Jess.. Oh it has to be a long story! XD what's more, I would really love to read more about what Dustin's POV. He is such an interesting character, hehe

Anyway, thanks again for making such a story :)
Guest chapter 41 . 8/4/2014
I've been waiting f ages f dis story to update n I love it can't wait for the next chapter XD
Samantha chapter 41 . 7/30/2014
I like your story. It just takes you awhile to update, but that's fine because everytime you update a smile comes to my face. Keep up the good work!
CaityLightning chapter 41 . 7/25/2014
Oops, that last review was supposed to be for this chapter :D

Sorry, lool
CaityLightning chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
I know that Jessica wants to get out of there, but seriously . . . she does not give Dustin enough credit for what he is doing for her. He is, essentially, her life source! She keeps fudging things up, and he has to fix them.
Wow, rant much . . . anyways, I just think that she is just being a tad bit too selfish, especially with the whole Gustavo thing. I mean, come on!
Anyways, awesome story! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
JJsMommy29 chapter 41 . 7/25/2014
he so needs to get here out of there and safely back home where she belongs
mylittleprincess chapter 41 . 7/25/2014
awesome chapter! update fast please.
Guest chapter 41 . 7/25/2014
I actually have really gone off Jessica. Yes I understand her predicament etc. But she just seems to be wholly selfish, and doesn't give nearly enough credit to Dustin. She plays him a lot, and while he is clearly trying extremely hard, she gives him no credit. He's nearly at her every beck and call, and it does seem like she knowingly manipulates him. I kind of want him to just ignore her for a while.
BigStretch chapter 40 . 6/30/2014
I don't usually post reviews on stories, but for this one I thought I might as well, seeing as there hasn't been a review in a few months, and I am actually really surprised by that. I just re-read through the story again, and am now ready to know what HAPPENS NEXT! I have enjoyed that most of the chapters have ended in this sort of way but this one is really got me. I have not actually gone over and read the re-write that you are currently working on but may do so if I find the time to.

Anyway, just thought I would give some input on my thoughts of the story so far. Having just finished reading it for a second time, I have to say that is rather enjoyable. I find the conflicts that the two main characters, Dustin and Jessica, are going through very interesting. I am now curious to see how Dustin reacts after this minor mishap that Jessica and Gustavo have had, and also interested to see what Dustin has to say about what Jessica saw between Dustin and Beth in the cafeteria.

Hope to see an update soon!
(Don't think that this story has been forgotten about by it's readers :D)
bookppl93 chapter 40 . 4/12/2014
poor Dustin , but he's being a jerk too :c update soon please c:
BleedingInLove chapter 21 . 4/8/2014
To Kill A Mocking Bird is one of the most amazing books. I never was interested in it until the school required for us to read it. But after I did...well lets just say its not leaving my top ten of fave books any time soon.

Just as a sidenote; I like this story .
blackrose88 chapter 40 . 3/26/2014
Love this story. Update soon! Dang
Kelsee chapter 40 . 3/15/2014
I hope your not done! I was really into this story add to that I didn't start it until a couple of days ago but I like this story! Don't give up!
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