Reviews for The Polis
PrematureLlama chapter 24 . 2/2/2013
Well, at least she didn't get into as much trouble as I thought she was going to. :/ And Dustin is just too dang cute. UHG. Haha! Good chapters! :) Update soon please! :D

PrematureLlama
mylittleprincess chapter 24 . 2/2/2013
AWWWWWWW! please updste soon!
Alaeryel chapter 24 . 2/2/2013
To me this chapter seemed more POETIC in content and I LOVED IT! Hearts are fluttering!
Alaeryel chapter 23 . 2/2/2013
Well I knew that was going to be too good to do her any justice but what can I say EXCEPT THAT YOU DEFINITELY KEEP ME ON MY TOES AND BOUNCING!
Alaeryel chapter 22 . 2/2/2013
OMG her feelings for him are starting to take over and this was BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT!
bookppl93 chapter 24 . 2/2/2013
That had to be one of the cutest chapters ever.
Cazie chapter 24 . 2/2/2013
Awwww that was so cute! :) please updste soon!
I didnt comment on both chapters because there were two, which I was REALLY happy about! :)
I cant wait for the next chapter!
twilightwinter chapter 22 . 1/21/2013
Ohhh falling in love are ew :) please keep writing I love it :)
JJsMommy29 chapter 22 . 1/21/2013
So hoping that she gets to make a phone call and thar she can escape but also hope that Dustin goes with her i like them two together so keep up the amazing work
PrematureLlama chapter 22 . 1/20/2013
ECKKKK! This was such a good chapter... Once again. :) I really love Dustin... But I just... He needs to be more open to the idea of getting her the fuck outta this crazy place. xD Loved loved loved the chapter! Thanks and update soon! :)

PrematureLlama
CallMeASuckerForLove chapter 22 . 1/20/2013
This is such a great story! Very original and interesting! Things are now changing for Jessica and Dustin :)
bookppl93 chapter 22 . 1/20/2013
Whoops. This hearts out of its cage.
Cazie chapter 22 . 1/20/2013
Awesome! I loved this chapter... please update soon
Alaeryel chapter 21 . 1/4/2013
OMG -it was just a test-I nearly wet myself-LOL! OH WHAT A SNEAKY GIRL SHE IS-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT-BRILLIANTLY DONE AGAIN!
L.Marythe4th chapter 21 . 12/28/2012
I love this story! Best story I've read on fictionpress, keep it up!
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