Reviews for The Polis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well, at least she didn't get into as much trouble as I thought she was going to. :/ And Dustin is just too dang cute. UHG. Haha! Good chapters! :) Update soon please! :D PrematureLlama |
![]() ![]() AWWWWWWW! please updste soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To me this chapter seemed more POETIC in content and I LOVED IT! Hearts are fluttering! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I knew that was going to be too good to do her any justice but what can I say EXCEPT THAT YOU DEFINITELY KEEP ME ON MY TOES AND BOUNCING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG her feelings for him are starting to take over and this was BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That had to be one of the cutest chapters ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww that was so cute! :) please updste soon! I didnt comment on both chapters because there were two, which I was REALLY happy about! :) I cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh falling in love are ew :) please keep writing I love it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So hoping that she gets to make a phone call and thar she can escape but also hope that Dustin goes with her i like them two together so keep up the amazing work |
![]() ![]() ![]() ECKKKK! This was such a good chapter... Once again. :) I really love Dustin... But I just... He needs to be more open to the idea of getting her the fuck outta this crazy place. xD Loved loved loved the chapter! Thanks and update soon! :) PrematureLlama |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great story! Very original and interesting! Things are now changing for Jessica and Dustin :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoops. This hearts out of its cage. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I loved this chapter... please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG -it was just a test-I nearly wet myself-LOL! OH WHAT A SNEAKY GIRL SHE IS-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT-BRILLIANTLY DONE AGAIN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Best story I've read on fictionpress, keep it up! |