| Reviews for The Polis |
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   MangoGirl777 chapter 36 . 9/19/2013 i thought this was a rated T...now its rated M...mmf, it was good anyway |
| Guest chapter 36 . 9/17/2013 So hoping his plan works can't wait for more |
| Alaeryel chapter 36 . 9/15/2013 OH MY GOD! I think I am going to have to take a cold shower now Lot-IT WAS HOT HOT HOT! I am still grinning like a Cheshire cat-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! I don't think you need to tone it down a bit but that is just my thinking anyway! I have been waiting for this for some time now and you DID NOT DISAPPOINT! |
| Alaeryel chapter 35 . 9/15/2013 Well at least they are admitting it to one another now that they love each other-YAY! Once again it was an AMAZING and BRILLIANT chapter and I can't wait for the next one ! Congratulations on your new job-it is wonderful I am sure! I have had some things come up myself both health wise and vacation but I am back now and hope I can catch up and stay caught up this time! |
| mylittleprincess chapter 36 . 9/15/2013 I love Dustin so much, i hope they both escape and live happy together. |
| Stunnamac chapter 36 . 9/15/2013 Wow just wow. I just read everything you have written so far and man oh man this story is awesome. I absolutely hate the Polis society and Rochester but reading about Jess and Dustin brings me joy lol. I love how strong Jess is and I also love her unconventional relationship with Dustin. Dustin is so sweet and I hope they can both escape that god forsaken place. Jessica is quite the gal! She is so beautiful inside and out! I want to cut everyone that thinks otherwise. I love how she changed from a shy, quiet girl to a fiery, headstrong chica. You are a wonderful writer and this story is so perfectly written. The pace is perfect, the details are on point, and the emotions I feel, just damn. Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 36 . 9/15/2013 Please here, please like this. Don't let Jessica leave him behind |
| clatterkerching chapter 36 . 9/14/2013 Good story so far, but might I suggest you raise the rating up to M after this chapter? Just so that if you won't get reported for the content in this chapter. |
| Cazie chapter 36 . 9/14/2013 Okay... Wow. Um, well that was interesting... Actually made me a tad embarrassed to be reading it, but ya know... Story's so good I didn't mind too much... Can't wait for the next chapter and I appreciate the warning at the top! I sorta knew what to expect, so it didn't mentally scar me too much! (Just kidding my brain was already twisted). Update soon please! |
| BurstofPassion chapter 36 . 9/14/2013 Oh! For a second there, I thought he was gonna cave in! Good chapter ending. |
| JJsMommy29 chapter 35 . 9/13/2013 So can't. wait to see hows there trip to put her on birth controls go |
| MangoGirl777 chapter 15 . 9/12/2013 YOU...Updated...YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ! :))))))))))) |
| bookppl93 chapter 35 . 9/11/2013 Can't he stay with her and forget the polis ;-; |
| Alisha chapter 35 . 9/9/2013 Brilliant chapter so far! I do not trust Rochester to not have a creeping suspicion at the least though... from what I can see, he is a very intelligent and covert individual. I am glad to see Dustin has a plan. Maybe this is building to a climax, perhaps? I would certainly love a good showdown... :p Very awesome to see an update. It made my night to see it :) Hope to see another soon! (Btw- congrats on your new job!) |
| mylittleprincess chapter 35 . 9/9/2013 yay! your back and good luck with your new job, update please. |