Reviews for Melody
incorrect pass chapter 21 . 7/7
So fp isnt letting me log in. But i just have to review. This is,hands down, one of best written stroies in fp. The writing is amazing. The way the characters are described and their progress is shown...oh my god it was near about perfect. I really really really really think you deserve so much more reviews. I mean , please dont ever stop writing. And bdw are you publishing anything anytime soon? Coz i promise i will be one of the first to buy. Now i have to check out your other stories. Love your story and wriring. Your fan,
Lorray95 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
I read thus story a while back, but i had forgotten the title! Ugh it was horrible trying to remeber but i did a few weeks later. YAYY!...let me say that this story is just plain awesone in every way...dont believe me just read it yourself.
Tippiting Icebergs chapter 21 . 9/13/2014
With the genre you chose, I was expecting knife fights, cars crashing and careening over overpasses, walking away from explosions, cooly without looking back, or at least Tucker trying to kill the kid... throughout the whole story not the first couple of chapters.
But your kinda action... ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) Haha. It didnt disappoint, don't get me wrong. In fact, I couldn't put it down.. Actually that's a bit of a lie, but really I couldn't stop thinking about it (might sound a bit weird eeep)
It was a bit lengthy, though. And I didn't understand the introduction for that new character two chapters before the last one? Is he in another one of your stories? O.o
Queen NekoChan chapter 13 . 8/30/2014
Dear god please do not bring in music puns I suffered through a large string of them over on Facebook
Nbsiren chapter 21 . 6/20/2014
Loved it
Nbsiren chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
lol I don't think he'll be free of Tucker that easily :P
Mandy S. Bryan chapter 21 . 5/12/2014
Great story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Wow, the brutality in this first chapter is horrifying. Also, in the US, would you actually be expected to pay if the police hospitalised you? That's awful.
LadyCarrie chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
I read this a while ago, i don't know if i ever reviewed though :O I loved this story! :D I expected a girl to come in like up until it was extremely obvious that they had a thing xD But The manin character reminds me of a girl, so its okay xD But this is the first book i ever read with a gay pairing. I read it like six months ago, and now I'm obsessed with yaoi fan fiction! XD It's all you fault xD Tahnk you! lol
EPuppy chapter 21 . 9/26/2013
Omg! Sequellll plzzz? This needs drama like tucker trying to idk cuz when tuck said that he no longer needed protection i tough that somethin was gonna happenn
EPuppy chapter 20 . 9/26/2013
EPuppy chapter 19 . 9/26/2013
I can sense sum dramuh :o
EPuppy chapter 18 . 9/26/2013
Fic this love already i :)
EPuppy chapter 17 . 9/26/2013
Awwwww luvvvv
EPuppy chapter 16 . 9/26/2013
Ohmygosh one of the best chapps:)
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