Reviews for Melody
VoiceInsideYourHeadVIII chapter 21 . 10/3/2011
OMG This was a great story, I couldn't stop reading it!
MinionsAreStalkingMe chapter 21 . 8/11/2011
I really enjoyed this story. It's one of my favorites.
wildeep chapter 21 . 7/20/2011
Hi :)

I really enjoyed this story. I'll agree that it was fluffy, but not overly so, and I'm actually glad that it wasn't any more angst-ridden than this. There are already a ton of stories around that're basically just angst-fests so I actually like that this was a break from that.

I'm curious if you've considered doing a follow-up on Milo & Add, though, to clear up some of the unresolved issues like: 1) whether Add ever goes to college, 2) whether his mom actually ever divorces his dad, 3) whether Add ever meets his dad again, 4) how Addison's & Will's relationship plays out (Does Willy ever get any friendlier?), 5) what happens with Tucker (i.e. Does he become some kind of drug kingpin or do the police manage to take him down eventually?).

I would so totally read anything else you write about Addison & Milo.
wert chapter 21 . 7/17/2011
I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for writing it. Addy, Milo and Mickey are undeniably adorable. Good job.
JudasMonster chapter 21 . 7/11/2011
Melody was a nice average story. Although it isn't what I normally read it was good.

Personally I didn't think there was enough angst and conflict in the story, so it was a total fluff-fest.

What ever happened to Duke? Why introduce him and then just ignore him? O_o

Keep on writing _

JudasMonster chapter 5 . 7/11/2011
Omg? Lol? WTF WTF WTF? I wasn't expecting Milo to be such a dirty old man o_o Pound into him? Jeez.. Lol. I'm kinda concerned... This story is rated T. Will we even see any of this?
JudasMonster chapter 4 . 7/11/2011
Aww. This chapter is so cute and sweet and fluffy. I especially liked the scene where Steel eyes was all like "You'll be here?" and Addy is all like "Yupz". Too cute!

When Steel eyes asked Addy to stay with him permanently I was surprised Addy didn't ask why. He just said yes, a bit unrealistic to me.

In retrospect perhaps you could've added some filler chapters which showed Addy/Steel eyes getting closer and friendlier before having him ask.

I think you're awesome. I might pimp you out on my profile :) but... You have to update Dannyboy! Omgz it's like my fave story here!
Beautiful Kaos chapter 21 . 5/22/2011
I loved this fic. It flowed really well and was so easy to read. The relationship between Addison and Milo was so endearing. And the sex scenes were hot to boot! I cant believe you didn't get more reviews than you did. You deserve a hell of a lot more. Great work!
wallawallabingbang chapter 21 . 5/10/2011
i cant believe it ended

wallawallabingbang chapter 18 . 5/9/2011
he saved a damsal in distress :)
artemisia90 chapter 17 . 4/3/2011
i just love this story!it's really good and sweet! i don't understand the problem willy has but whatever!
jicalazuxil chapter 17 . 4/3/2011
Ah! I do hope that gets fixed for you, I haven't any idea what's wrong with it.

But... me loves the chapter. Especially fearless Milo: "I have no fear!" AND the declaration of luv. Love... I was just waiting for them to say that. I'm such a sap. ¡Thankies for continuing to update this!
jicalazuxil chapter 16 . 4/1/2011
Fluffy hppy time with the family! Milo speaking spanish! (even though it's only the Miranda thing)

Just to correct you on the use of it: Usted tiene derecho a guardar silencio. Cualquier cosa que usted diga puede ser usada contra usted en una corte de ley.

Lovely chap, and now, Add meets the Dad... intimidating. Hm, I was going to mention it earlier but keep forgetting.

Why is this in the action section again? I mean I only found it 'cause I was browsing your profile... I don't see it as Action but if you see it don't mind me...
jicalazuxil chapter 15 . 3/27/2011
Aw... thankies. I feel loved.

Cute chapter, I like Milo's POV, it shows another side of the story, different from Add's complete irreverence towards everybody and his joking manner (not saying I don't like that, course not)

I sort of expected something else though, I mean, just like Addison waking up and hoping it was a dream, I thought despite her previous actions Add's mom would come and say she only left because she was surprised or something... and happily ever after.

Oh well. It is a tad more realistic to expect her real reaction.

Thankies again for the dedication!
Tool Master chapter 8 . 3/27/2011
Oh, I've got nothing against profanity it's just the amount and how you use it, of course there will always be someone behind me saying they like that, so it's really insignificant in the long run.
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