Reviews for Melody
jicalazuxil chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Ah. Am a bit irritated at the moment from having tried at least 10 times to login, all the while repeatedly entering the wrong password. til one minute ago, I remembered that was my ff . net password... and yeah. Love how this is starting out, Steel-eyes!

I think your writing is one of the few "first-person pov" that's actually well written. Or at least actually appeals to me. Which is why I kindly beg of you to update My name is God... please?

I love this new story though, even though I was getting Author Alerts for it, I hadn't bothered to check it out. I was so missing out...

That first line killed me. Thank you ever so much for making me look insane in front of various other commuters. XD

Onto more reading!
C A Leiko chapter 13 . 3/25/2011
Hey there :)

I really love this story, I really do. I was so surprised that you only had 11 reviews as well, so I thought I'd drop you one despite the fact I'm not great at them...

The story is great, and I love the characters and the way you write.

I hope you continue writing, because I'd be sad if the story wouldn't be able to end!

I know what it's like to feel a lack of motivation when writing, and I hope you don't lose yours :D

I know I already said this, but I love the story, and I honestly look forward to getting updates in my inbox!

Keep writing, you're great :D

Chloe;
Tool Master chapter 4 . 3/25/2011
Man, you sure do use a lot of baseless profanity. Just because you can curse doesn't mean you have to every other line.
wallawallabingbang chapter 13 . 3/24/2011
whoo theres an update already !

you should do more milo povs :0
wallawallabingbang chapter 11 . 3/22/2011
im glad you did a milos pov and i hope you do more of them
The BubbleGum Bandit chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
your beta for Dannyboy has discovered your unfaithfulness and is livid. you left us hanging on a cliff to write another story? I see how it is! *storms off but leaves note*

I'm kind of likin' this story... but I'm still mad.

(in case my joking nature didn't make it through the internet, ... i'm joking, lol)
Dark Day chapter 10 . 3/18/2011
Really like this story, kind of goes where you think it might but the interpay between Add and Milo works well. Look forward to seeing what happens next...
WayfarerRedemption chapter 9 . 3/16/2011
This is one hot story! I love the interactions between Addison and Milo.
kookoos chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
you update really fast :0
kookoos chapter 5 . 3/1/2011
you should do more from milos pov

also happy about the update :)
kookoos chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
kidnapped twice and its only the second chapter

hope you can update soon :)
firestar267 chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
talk about an eventful day! It will be interesting to see him get away from Milos questioning and I hope he actually cuts ties with Tucker because that guys a douchebag! Great balance between action and humor again, really enjoyed it.
firestar267 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
This was brilliant, a really interesting and well written introduction, I enjoyed the read and cant wait for more :)
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