Reviews for Melody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there :) I really love this story, I really do. I was so surprised that you only had 11 reviews as well, so I thought I'd drop you one despite the fact I'm not great at them... The story is great, and I love the characters and the way you write. I hope you continue writing, because I'd be sad if the story wouldn't be able to end! I know what it's like to feel a lack of motivation when writing, and I hope you don't lose yours :D I know I already said this, but I love the story, and I honestly look forward to getting updates in my inbox! Keep writing, you're great :D Chloe; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you sure do use a lot of baseless profanity. Just because you can curse doesn't mean you have to every other line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoo theres an update already ! you should do more milo povs :0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() im glad you did a milos pov and i hope you do more of them |
![]() ![]() ![]() your beta for Dannyboy has discovered your unfaithfulness and is livid. you left us hanging on a cliff to write another story? I see how it is! *storms off but leaves note* I'm kind of likin' this story... but I'm still mad. (in case my joking nature didn't make it through the internet, ... i'm joking, lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really like this story, kind of goes where you think it might but the interpay between Add and Milo works well. Look forward to seeing what happens next... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one hot story! I love the interactions between Addison and Milo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you update really fast :0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should do more from milos pov also happy about the update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() kidnapped twice and its only the second chapter hope you can update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() talk about an eventful day! It will be interesting to see him get away from Milos questioning and I hope he actually cuts ties with Tucker because that guys a douchebag! Great balance between action and humor again, really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was brilliant, a really interesting and well written introduction, I enjoyed the read and cant wait for more :) |