| Reviews for Melody |
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   jicalazuxil chapter 1 . 3/25/2011 Ah. Am a bit irritated at the moment from having tried at least 10 times to login, all the while repeatedly entering the wrong password. til one minute ago, I remembered that was my ff . net password... and yeah. Love how this is starting out, Steel-eyes! I think your writing is one of the few "first-person pov" that's actually well written. Or at least actually appeals to me. Which is why I kindly beg of you to update My name is God... please? I love this new story though, even though I was getting Author Alerts for it, I hadn't bothered to check it out. I was so missing out... That first line killed me. Thank you ever so much for making me look insane in front of various other commuters. XD Onto more reading! |
| C A Leiko chapter 13 . 3/25/2011 Hey there :) I really love this story, I really do. I was so surprised that you only had 11 reviews as well, so I thought I'd drop you one despite the fact I'm not great at them... The story is great, and I love the characters and the way you write. I hope you continue writing, because I'd be sad if the story wouldn't be able to end! I know what it's like to feel a lack of motivation when writing, and I hope you don't lose yours :D I know I already said this, but I love the story, and I honestly look forward to getting updates in my inbox! Keep writing, you're great :D Chloe; |
| Tool Master chapter 4 . 3/25/2011 Man, you sure do use a lot of baseless profanity. Just because you can curse doesn't mean you have to every other line. |
| wallawallabingbang chapter 13 . 3/24/2011 whoo theres an update already ! you should do more milo povs :0 |
| wallawallabingbang chapter 11 . 3/22/2011 im glad you did a milos pov and i hope you do more of them |
| The BubbleGum Bandit chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 your beta for Dannyboy has discovered your unfaithfulness and is livid. you left us hanging on a cliff to write another story? I see how it is! *storms off but leaves note* I'm kind of likin' this story... but I'm still mad. (in case my joking nature didn't make it through the internet, ... i'm joking, lol) |
| Dark Day chapter 10 . 3/18/2011 Really like this story, kind of goes where you think it might but the interpay between Add and Milo works well. Look forward to seeing what happens next... |
| WayfarerRedemption chapter 9 . 3/16/2011 This is one hot story! I love the interactions between Addison and Milo. |
| kookoos chapter 7 . 3/6/2011 you update really fast :0 |
| kookoos chapter 5 . 3/1/2011 you should do more from milos pov also happy about the update :) |
| kookoos chapter 2 . 2/25/2011 kidnapped twice and its only the second chapter hope you can update soon :) |
| firestar267 chapter 2 . 2/23/2011 talk about an eventful day! It will be interesting to see him get away from Milos questioning and I hope he actually cuts ties with Tucker because that guys a douchebag! Great balance between action and humor again, really enjoyed it. |
| firestar267 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011 This was brilliant, a really interesting and well written introduction, I enjoyed the read and cant wait for more :) |