Love this!

Keep writing...this chapter was really good..please make them longer though

Noticed it's been a while since you updated, please tell me you plan on continuing this story and I also hope it has regular updates. Has real potential.

Please tell me you're going to continue. I have only read the first chapter and I love it.

Loving this can't wait to read more :D

I love this story. I just found it today. Please continue. I have added it to my favorite list.

I have one suggestion, please have some prrof read. Another set of eyes can come in handy. If you do not have some one, I will be happy to help.

Gloria

omg I love this story! You could cut the tension with a knife...I can't wait for them to get to know each other, wow

I am really enjoying this story. Please update soon.

yay i am happy that u r back and cannot wait 4 the next update )

Love it.

Brit Zachar

enjoying the story so far and cannot wait for an update

i love reading bw/wm stories and i am happy to have yours to read

-kell

I want to read this story but spacing! Spacing is key and It's all lumped together and hard to follow, you should try a format like this: /s/4908852/1/

I didn't read it. You need to fix the spacing in this. It's horrible. You either wrote long paragraphs or the document didn't format properly when it was uploaded either way it's unreadable. I will love to read but you really should fix it.

I love the fact that your writing about a interracial couple. Thats very refreshing and I'm definitely going to be following your story.

The only suggestion I have to make is - Please break down your paragraphs, its really difficult to read huge, seemingly endless, blocks of text.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Good Work.

Cheers