|Reviews for Ponderous Parasol|
| too.much.of.water chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Oh, this is so lovely I'm tempted to eat it up. It's utterly nonsensical and oddly Roald Dahl-esque but that could just be me. My god yes, as a child I often wondered if I hurt my bed when I slept in it or my books when I folded them but never did I attempt to understand the woe of umbrella's. You've just made my childhood self very happy :)
| taylorduncan chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Aww! That was so cool! I never even thought of that
| lymli chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I like the end, it's happy :)
| flameofthesoul chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I like this a lot.
It's a really cute concept, one that presents an individual view on something so common.
It kind of reminds me of a Shel Silverstien poem.
Good going. :)
| Thomas Aldison chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I love this poem! its got good rhythm and its a nice little tale that switches the perspective round from the norm. Good job!
| Parkchester chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I thought the poem was really clever. I enjoyed it thoroughly though I was a bit confused at the line "How could they stare so tactlessly
at one who has no feet?" I guess I didn't really get why the fact that the umbrella has no feet had any bearing on anything so if makes the rhyme sound a bit forced.