|Reviews for Even Angels Can Cry|
| Tathwem Essenuejal chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
1) "I was wearing a dress, though I hadn't been in the crash" should read "I was wearing a dress, as though I hadn't been in the crash
2) "just because it was small doesn't mean there was drama" should read "just because it was small doesn't mean there was not any drama."
3) She knew I'd still liked hime should read She knew I still liked him.
Those are minor though. Other wise decent but kind of cliche. There needs to be something that separates this from other stories like it.
| the ticking clock chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Very emotional and descriptive. Good job! This story lookes intresting, I will have to follow it...