Reviews for Chopped Liver |
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Eff chapter 5 . 12/7/2021 It's almost sad that I got so invested into something written a decade back. I loved the title "chopped liver". Pop culture references are amusing. Regards of how everyone in the story perceives her, Alex is a likable character. |
Peachie Miss chapter 5 . 3/17/2011 Enjoyed the update, I wonder how this plan will go. I wonder what Carson's deal is, and if he will play a bigger(nicer?) part in the story. |
JadeDream chapter 5 . 3/13/2011 Interesting, can't wait to see what she does next, update soon! |
Arreana chapter 5 . 3/8/2011 Awkward phone conversations to come? How long will that phone's battery last, I wonder? I look forward for more! Your story is adorable and an easy read. To any potential readers out there: check it out, it's really sweet and well written. It flows quickly, it's not a chore to read by any stretch of the imagination. Chopped Liver is a great title. Keep up the good work! |
Arreana chapter 4 . 3/8/2011 Well, at least she's constant, but man... I like the reverse gossip, talking smack about the pretty girl was pulled off well, I felt bad for her, what an awkward situation! |
Arreana chapter 3 . 3/8/2011 Ah, the "Mr. Darcy" appears! hooray, these are far and away my favorite sort of characters. Will Alex thaw his heart? She damn well better! Also, I like the way you're portraying Tucker as this rather... selfish guy who seems to only think for himself "I don't want you to be mad at me, sort of nonsense." Bulshi*t |
Arreana chapter 2 . 3/8/2011 I have to wonder if you're from this region. I'm from the pacific northwest (I live in the foothills, wear flannel, smoke salmon, the works) so it's always interesting seeing another area portrayed. I like this chapter, nothing much to say, but I liked being able to feel the relief with the character. I know what it feels like to be with family after a hard time (well, most of my family). Keep up the good work! |
Arreana chapter 1 . 3/8/2011 Your story has really good flow, it's sweet, and mild and just the sort of thing you want to read on a cold day off! Only suggestion is to make the flashback a little bit more obvious. Not italics or anything, but I just didn't realize I was reading a flashback at first - whoops! I had to scroll up to reorient myself. That's all! Keep up the great work! |
Peachie Miss chapter 4 . 2/23/2011 Haha! I'm glad I clicked this, it's shaping up to be cute! At first I wondered if that Carson guy would end up liking her, but he was basically a huge jerk, so now I'm properly focused on Alex and Tucker. But how will she win him back? I don't know how I should feel about Delaney, she's just there. I wonder if she has any fangs to bear when she's pushed into a corner. I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter! |
AlijaS117 chapter 4 . 2/22/2011 cute. |
AlijaS117 chapter 3 . 2/22/2011 love it update soon |
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 Woah. I love that this is a cliche turned on its head, and from the popular girl's point of view. :) I'm so glad it's written well because it's such an interesting plot idea, and i'm glad it's not ruined by bad writing. :D |