Reviews for Dreams
squidge chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
I can't log into ficciepress! :'( I dunno if you remember me... I've recently changed my name to Squidge (based on a real life nickname) but used to be wolfeh/icewolf9 on here?

BTOI I have missed you and your writing! I'm bored at work and then randomly decided to re-visit ficciepress!

ANYWAY - onto the review!

"Impossible to cross the line

Between this chaos in my mind

And the real world that I've left behind,

Nothing matters anymore."

Love love love this. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. I could never write poetry half as good as you, and if I did, it would pale in comparison.

While the "genre" may not be to everyone's tastes, there's a passion here, a message to convey. It gives me goosebumps.

Please please write some more. :)

L

Squidge
the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Love the opening line - perfect way to describe that. I also really like the rhyme scheme you've got going on here, and of course, the last stanza (because I am just partial to endings.) You know, your muse should really get together with you more often :)