Oh, wow. This is really good. Like, really, really good. I like how you don't give the girl a name, it just makes her so much more interesting. I really really love her last words. This fic is one to remember, and I congratulate you! It flows so well! Favorited!

Interesting. I liked the girl's nihilistic POV, and how insignificantly views life, down to her character not even having a name. She's right, too. Not that anyone should behave as she did, but her views aren't all together wrong, you know? Leaves a taste in your mouth, this fic does. Like...she's right, but wrong, got what she deserved, but no one should go out like that...

Loved it :D

What a dark, morbid story...just how I like it! Your main character-the heartless girl-was very interesting. The whole idea itself is thought provoking and her end, in my opinion, was made tragic but poignant. I liked the last line about the blown-out candle, too.