|Reviews for the shipwrecked|
| darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
The rum is always gone, you'd think he'd have gotten used to it by now.
This isn't precisely lovely or pretty or nice - they just don't really fit. It's cool. Yeah. Awesome, even.
And I love your title. That too.
. darker shade of pale
| Bloody Red Moon chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Ha, that was awesome! Nice summary, by the way. If only I could write a decent summary, too...Anyway, I like breaking lines, like you did between "Help" and "All."
| Dragon-Rider II chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
OH MY GOD, that's hilarious-ness!
'All the rum is gone'! That made me crack up so hard! XD
Best. Haiku. EVER.
Two thumbs up.
| Ora Lee chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Lol two thumbs up!
| lymli chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
for some reason, it scared me, XD
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Ha! Hahaha. :D That is excellent. Oh, Jack Sparrow. Keep writing! :)
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Love it xD
Especially the timely line break after 'help'.
| Jonathan James Bingley chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Best. Haiku. EVER. I like your creativity.
| The Curse of Intent chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Haha I like this. Your summary amuses me ]
| Seireina chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Ha-ha! That's great. Reminds me of some of the wild parties in my long lost youth.
P.S. I know what you mean about summaries. Sometimes it takes more words to introduce a haiku than are in the haiku.