Reviews for the shipwrecked
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
The rum is always gone, you'd think he'd have gotten used to it by now.

This isn't precisely lovely or pretty or nice - they just don't really fit. It's cool. Yeah. Awesome, even.

And I love your title. That too.

. darker shade of pale
Bloody Red Moon chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Ha, that was awesome! Nice summary, by the way. If only I could write a decent summary, too...Anyway, I like breaking lines, like you did between "Help" and "All."

Bloody
Dragon-Rider II chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
AHAHA!

OH MY GOD, that's hilarious-ness!

'All the rum is gone'! That made me crack up so hard! XD

*Clears throat.*

Best. Haiku. EVER.

Two thumbs up.
Ora Lee chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Lol two thumbs up!
lymli chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
for some reason, it scared me, XD
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Ha! Hahaha. :D That is excellent. Oh, Jack Sparrow. Keep writing! :)
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Love it xD

Especially the timely line break after 'help'.
Jonathan James Bingley chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Best. Haiku. EVER. I like your creativity.
The Curse of Intent chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Haha I like this. Your summary amuses me ]
Seireina chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Lol!
Punslinger chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Ha-ha! That's great. Reminds me of some of the wild parties in my long lost youth.

P.S. I know what you mean about summaries. Sometimes it takes more words to introduce a haiku than are in the haiku.