Reviews for I Do Not Come With Accesories
UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
this is just an afternote to my other reveiw. I wrote a poem recently, but no one has read it so far. I was wondering if you would give me some feedback on it.
UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
When I read this poem, I just imagine a high-class girl in the 1700's, in her nightdress, rolling her eyes and crossing her arms as her mother and dressers try to beg her into a big, froufy ball gown. I really like the way you present the tone with the stratigeic bolding of certain words and phrases. it really adds to the overall effect of the poem. I like almost everything abput this poem. The one thing I don't like is the ending. I wish it wouldn't end; it's a lovely poem.
BjellybeanW chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
This is exactly like me. So glad you wrote this, because I couldn't have written it any better.
Amber chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I like this, especially from "Your floaty fabrics..." and on.