Reviews for The First Time
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Well first of all I have to say BRAVO mah midget! The muse has done you well with this one, I must say. I can tell you wrote it, with your typical use of commas and fluidity of your words. However, it is definitely more personal than your usual works, and I can see why. Even the language allows the reader to beleive that they know you better than your other works do. It's wonderfully personal, and yet still has that same elegant touch that your writing always does. I applaud you and hope that the muse keeps up the good work! lol

~yo midget :D