|Reviews for Stone|
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
I like the common thread here between the second line top down and the second line bottom up. very neat.
consistency of the rhyme makes it easy to read and gives it a rhythmic flow. sweet
i like the imagery in this line
'two hands extended towards the sky' it seemed like both of them are reaching towards a place called utopia... i don't know if you've watched 'fate/stay night', but this line really reminded me of the scene where they both worked together (last battle i believe).
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I really like this piece. The rhythm is flawless I think, and you rhyme really well. You have some fabulous lines such as: "Two hands extended towards the sun More drops of rain, a clash of will And now the sky is standing still." The image is crystal clear and quite pretty. Nice work.