Reviews for Ice Cube Vertebrae
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Oh wow. I'm no poet by any means, so I generally respect anyone who CAN. Although this is beautiful! Short, but really well written. I like the last paragraph the best. Great job, again! (:

x mandy
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Methinks the title can have something with ice or bones... The visual this gave me was interesting.
Loqwell chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
You probably did not intend to give literal imagery in this poem, but the first thing that came into my mind was of a backbone made of ice; and I loved it. That being said, you've given a rather strong emotional impression to the reader while focusing on such a small piece of the speaker and I very much enjoyed that. Oh, and I think perhaps 'Ice Cube Vertebrae' could be the title as it's a small piece from the poem, but it somewhat encompasses the whole theme-even if the reader won't quite know how much until they read it. :]