Reviews for Leap of love
Cole Culain chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Oh, this one's really good. It shows the conflict you have over making this difficult choice.
Charite chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Beautiful! the story line is clear and the rhyme scheme is awesome. Really great job am lovin the rhythmn
listen to what i've never said chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I love this :) its got just enough rhyme to catch your eye but not be distracting and adds really great metaphor to the symmetry of the subject.

"I look at the others / And see jagged rocks / That would skewer me through / If i were to drop / I look back at this one / and see only smooth walls / Nothing to stab me / If I were to fall"

"I take a deep breath / And look up above / And take a running start / For this last leap of love"

purely awesome
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I love how you explained this. Its 100% true. I love it. I've been there to. Great job!

Adding to C2

XKristie MarieX