|Reviews for Yuzuki, the Moon, and the Stars|
| YoursInDemigodishness chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
This was very nice and interesting. There really isn't much that's wrong, but my one suggestion is that in the sentence: "Slowly she started to rise into the air too." I think it would sound even more dramatic without the "too". But that's just my opinion. All in all, it was a great story ;) good job. Funky names, too.
| WorldsAngel chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I love creation myth's. This is really cool; I've never read this one before. Thanks for posting it!
I also like how you explained everything at the end, not a lot of people understand language plug-in's. :) Aweomse job and I can't wait to read your other writings as well. Your style is very nice, it flows well!