|Reviews for The Second Clan|
| Shezu Rivera chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
What a wonderful story I love it and I would like to know more about this nameless person. I just have one suggestion. Try putting breaks between the shifts. (i.e. dreams, memories, reality, ect...) Other than that, wonderful, wonderful story
| Blade Liger Legend chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Hey, I just finished reading and I have to say I was a little confused by some of it, but it was so well written that I just had to finish it!
Nice one-shot, it looks like you worked really hard on it.
I personally would like to see more chapters, if anything, just to understand the characters more. :D
| SoullessLove chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I think you should definitley continue! this was awesome, the descriptions and everything were amazing. Plus it would be cool to know more about the back story and what exactly the main character is. I read Heirs of Who? 1 and what you posted of 2 and really liked them but the style for this seems more matured, I hope to read more.