|Reviews for Smolder|
| Yalina chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
Ofcoarse we will all review, its our little bit of appreciation for everything that you write. Thanks for making this chapter longer and for Cole! My deprived Cole-meter just went lower. Im just waiting for that juicy kiss for them to happen already because I just know itll be great and hopefully it'll lead to more...? Awe and its such a shame that they didnt kiss because it just sounded like such a romantic place to...let go. Ha, and Ryan thinks Cole has self control? He brought her there in the first place and that is a huge step in the I-have-no-self-control-for-you-and-im-trying-really-hard-to-find-some factor.
Well this was a nice little piece of Cole chapter. Next chapter, it's back to the real hectic life for Ryan huh?
Loved it. Update soon.
| surrendertomusic chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
I missed you Cole
| dcdrrrr chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
yeah another chapter another chapter another chapter! im literally bouncing off the walls! (cough, in my head)
but yeah another chapter! thank you!
| Insanely Random chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
Oh snap. Macon might not be dead! :O
Wonderful chapter, as usual. I really do enjoy reading about Cole and Ryan's relationship. It's so complicated it's enjoyable. Excellent writing style, I have to say. You write it so you can actually feel the pain and confusion Ryan is going through.
| RmGonzales chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
YAYY COLE!:( lol I am so happy. But sad cuz they are still pulling away from each other.
| deactivated20172203 chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
I adored this chapter :D I feel so sorry for Ryan and Cole though, unable to be together...but it was adorable how Cole was so worried about her. Amazing chapter as always, chica :)
- Hearts x
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 6 . 3/31/2011
Sure, I like Liam, but not for Ryan.. If you want you can send Liam to Aberdeen for me though 8)
Meh, I do want to know what they have to do with anything though...
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 6 . 3/31/2011
I'm glad she doesnt really like him :D
I'm also glad she hasnt yet decided to use him to make Cole Jealous... she's just confused... which I Like, it makes her likeable... not that Ryan was never unlikeable...
But update soon... Loving it :D
| deactivated20172203 chapter 6 . 3/28/2011
I'm loving this whole Liam-Ryan plot twist, but I can't help but get the feeling that Liam isn't quite right, like he's hiding a secret or something, or he isn't as nice as he seems. Anyhoo, yeah, I miss Cole already :( :L
Can't wait till chapter six :D
- Hearts x
| Insanely Random chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
AMAZINGLY SWEET CHAPTER!
Between the romance and the friendship this was just full of 'awws.'
Well, until the end, however. The ending was good, but sad. You can truly feel Ryan's pain and confusion.
Speaking of which, Liam seems okay, great even. He just isn't...well, Cole.
COLE! COLE! COLE!
| surrendertomusic chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
Hahaha, Liam is cute :)
But still..Team Cole
| Nutso Crazy Cookie Fan GirlBoy chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
Cole. No Liam. COLE! After building up that huge true love romance, it would just hurt too much to see you throw it away! Besides, can't Cole and a bunch of other supernaturals around the world eventually change the no human-supernatural relationships law? C'mon, this is a ROMANCE! Not a Romeo & Juliet style tragedy or a thing where the story's plot diesn't follow through! Please, please, please... Ryan & Cole belong together! Besides, I have a feeling you're going to change the plot so Liam & Connor are related to Tristan, just younger, more intelligent, not immortal (hopefully), and use psychology to help destroy their targets. I probably know the plot before you do! (Just kidding, but still, if youmwant you can use the plot. Just give me credit, please.)
| Nutso Crazy Cookie Fan GirlBoy chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I haven't even begun to read yet, but thankyouthankyouthankyou! I love you extremely sincerely dearly! More than Ariel loves 'Human Stuff' and Prince Eric! (I should add drama lover in the byline, shouldn't I? Too bad, not enough space!)
| bumbleB825 chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
Cole is far superior than Liam
| Yalina chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
Again, loved it. I actually like Liam. He's... different. Comfortable yet with an air of mystery so he's still interesting and exciting to read about. I still feel like he is something, not human, but I dont know. I love how he says "awfully" and "quite" just like a Brit Boy. Kinda charming actually.
The kiss. I really liked how you described it and in everything Liam did, Ryan compared it to Cole and how she never stopped thinking bout him. The kiss was... kinda how I expected it to be for Ryan and Liam. I think it just proves how in love she is with Cole and that she is definitely getting over him anytime soon. Cole is kind of apathetic and Liam is kind of teasing and playful and just... Not Cole. Haha, maybe Im like Ryan, comparing Liam to Cole. Theyre very different so far but I like reading bout both of em. Tell me if you can, does Liam play a big part in this story or is he just here for the meantime and to cause more interest and drama with Cole?
Well anyway, thanks for the update, I enjoy reading this story very much. I like how you answer my reviews, I dont know if you do that to all your reviwers, but it shows that you appreciate our dedication to this story and feedback on it. No matter what, a simple Thank You means alot and I can guarantee you that we all thank YOU for even giving us the opportunity to live the life of Ryan and go through her journey with her. So Thank You.
Your reader and reviewer,