Reviews for Smolder
Yalina chapter 4 . 3/14/2011
Love it. Love it. Love it. You know, somehow I knew that it was Macon. (Which is ironic because im currently eating Bacon, haha) I dont know how but he just seemed like the one piece of this messed up puzzle that needed to come out already. I knew he was gonna make his appearance eventually and with it will probably come a whole lot more drama for Ryan and well... everybody. Just what she needs right? Poor Ryan, its like the cherry on top for her.

I love the way you ended this chapter. It just shows that no matter how much Ryan tries to imagine something that is exactly the opposite of what she wants or whats going to happen, she cant deprive herself from the truth.

Oh and by the way, since Ive been reading this since Simmer, Ive completely forgotten what Ryan or Cole look like. Do you have any pictures of them or of Mimi or anybody?

-Yalina :)
deactivated20172203 chapter 4 . 3/14/2011
Awesome chapter as always, the whole bit about her dad was seriously sad :(

Looking forward to chapter four :)

- Hearts x
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 4 . 3/13/2011
Love it! Post more soon!
Queen.Of.Cupcakes chapter 4 . 3/13/2011
:) Amazing as always!
surrendertomusic chapter 4 . 3/13/2011
Oh Ryan...
crazymazy chapter 3 . 3/11/2011
OH MY GOD sequel *sings in anglic voice* i was so happy there is a sequel and its just as good and intense and mysterious like the last one. you ABSOLUTLY and HAVE to update soon. iim like checking every like 2 hours to see if an update is up. YAY
StaNdUPtomE chapter 3 . 3/9/2011
no... i don't like cliffys... so what happened to Mimi?
Elyssa Morales chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Reve4ever chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
OMG! What's next? Is Tristan back? Why did Mimi scream? Love this chapter!
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
RmGonzales chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
No, Mimi! lol I hope she is okay
deactivated20172203 chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
I loved the banter between Ryan and Liam! Very cute :)

And the rest of the chapter was brilliant, as always, and, also as always, the cliffhanger left me craving more.

Can't wait till chapter three :D

- Hearts x
Berriee chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
So far I think it's going great


im wondering how Cole and Ryan are going to get together O;

and Liam and Connor seem so mysterious...

keep going! your doing really well and i'm looking forward to the next chapter
deactivated20172203 chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
Loved it! Though I feel sorry for Ryan. How come Cole gets an easy ride whilst she's still real upset? :P Anyway, awesome chapter and very well written as usual. I can't wait till chapter two :)

- Hearts x
CleoQueen chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
I thunk it's going good so far. It's interesting what Connor and Liam on the human scale and what Cole's reaction is going to be :) I'm excited for the next chapter
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