Reviews for Smolder
RmGonzales chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
God I love your style of writing! :)

I love it!

It is already exciting!
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Ehe I love it :) GET SOME hahaha can't wait for more!
Yalina chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Ah, I just knew that a new character was going to be in this story. And even if its only chapter one, I already want Cole to make an appearance but thats just my Cole-obssessed side :) I know that when he does make his comeback into the story, its going to be great, and the anticipation will be worth it so for right now, im just looking forward to the rest of this new journey. Cant wait.

Your devoted reader and reviewer,

-Yalina :)
surrendertomusic chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Really loving it so far!
StaNdUPtomE chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Cole you silly boy!'

update soon!
StaNdUPtomE chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
A really intense awesome prolouge... i can't wait to see what it means...
RmGonzales chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I love you!

I am so excited!


Yay for sequel :)
Queen.Of.Cupcakes chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I loved the prologue because it was seemingly sweet but had something hidden underneath! There is one small mistake that I have to point out:

"I imagined that when I found my white night"

You used night instead of knight(: But other than that, it was flawless!
Reve4ever chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
eek! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Your writing is fantastic!
CleoQueen chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Oh, sweet! I can already that this is going to be interesting :D
deactivated20172203 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
This prologue is brilliant. It is rare to come across such advanced writing such as yours, even more surpising given your age. This is just so genius and original - I can't wait for chapter one of the sequel, I'm sure it will be as awesome, if not better, than Simmer :)

- Hearts x
surrendertomusic chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
EK hahaha can't wait for more!
bumbleB825 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I like the title

you have simmer than smolder

it's a great match

so stoked for this:)
Yalina chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Yes! A sequel! And that was fast... I cant wait to see what your magical writing has in store for Ryan and Cole on this adevnture. Here we go again :)

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