Reviews for Smolder |
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![]() ![]() ![]() God I love your style of writing! :) I love it! It is already exciting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ehe I love it :) GET SOME hahaha can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I just knew that a new character was going to be in this story. And even if its only chapter one, I already want Cole to make an appearance but thats just my Cole-obssessed side :) I know that when he does make his comeback into the story, its going to be great, and the anticipation will be worth it so for right now, im just looking forward to the rest of this new journey. Cant wait. Your devoted reader and reviewer, -Yalina :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really loving it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cole you silly boy!' update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really intense awesome prolouge... i can't wait to see what it means... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love you! I am so excited! :) Yay for sequel :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the prologue because it was seemingly sweet but had something hidden underneath! There is one small mistake that I have to point out: "I imagined that when I found my white night" You used night instead of knight(: But other than that, it was flawless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() eek! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Your writing is fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, sweet! I can already that this is going to be interesting :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This prologue is brilliant. It is rare to come across such advanced writing such as yours, even more surpising given your age. This is just so genius and original - I can't wait for chapter one of the sequel, I'm sure it will be as awesome, if not better, than Simmer :) - Hearts x |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHMYGAWDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() EK hahaha can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the title you have simmer than smolder it's a great match so stoked for this:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! A sequel! And that was fast... I cant wait to see what your magical writing has in store for Ryan and Cole on this adevnture. Here we go again :) -Yalina |