Reviews for Smolder
surrendertomusic chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
Yalina chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
Oh. My. God.

I think, the best chapter in this story so far.

So much drama, so much... Wow.

I knew SOMETHING had to happen in this chapter, from the moment she went to the party. The Brady thing, he and Kayla broke up and Im glad cause she annoys me too, the kiss between them... wow... I dont even have words to describe this chapter because it wasnt even the kiss with Brady, it was just overall.

Cole kissing Avery, somehow I dont think Ryan saw how that kiss ended. Avery kissed HIM, not the other way round and if she had just stuck round, I have a feeling it would have been different. And then Ryan kissing Brady, when obviously Cole was watching probably made him think the same thing that Ryan was thinking when she saw Cole kissing Avery so it's just so frustrating because I wanna just smash them together and tell them to makeout and get over it already and get back together because whatever happens, good or bad, they go through it as a couple. Plus, Im in pain too when their not together as well as all the readers im sure.

The end, Oh god... I did not expect that. I expected for the argument between Ryan and Cole to be just them yelling at eachother and for it to be kinda like the "I hate you, I hate you too! Fine, fine!" kinda thing and for Cole to walk away and Ryan to go home and cry herself to sleep with the final sentences of the chapter explaining how she feels so hopeless, etc. But no. Hell no. I was just as shocked as Ryan.

I did NOT expect that. Holy Jesus. I squealed like a pig when I read that final sentence. Damn. Please please please, in the next chapter, do NOT start off with a whole new day in Ryan's life, just please please please continue from the kiss because Im DYING to know what happenes. God, what a cliffhanger.

Please, I beg you, update fast and since theres been no Ryan and Cole smush until now, please let that kiss be a pretty steamy memorable kiss that'll make pornstars blush. Haha, well I think thats a little too much, but im sure youll give us something great that'll leave us wanting more.

Your devoted Reader and Reviewer,

Yalina :)
deactivated20172203 chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
Eep! This chapter has been one of the best so far. A lot of Cole, which is always a plus ;) I actually squealed at the last line...finally they kiss. And it was good to see Cole's calm facade finally break a little.

Anyway, amazing chapter as always, I can't wait until chapter twelve :D

- Hearts x
Insanely Random chapter 10 . 4/30/2011
Totally loved this chapter, even though it was sad. Poor Ryan! She can't be in a stable relationship because of Cole :( You're an excellent writer, and anything you write is nothing short of spectacular! Keep up the good work and update soon!
Saya chapter 10 . 4/28/2011
I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to writing the next chappie. :D Will be watching this story! :P

And this chapter was a surprise. :D I liked it.

Your characters seem alive. :) And I must say if this is where you're going through writer's block, I have to see you when you aren't. :P

Yalina chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
Oh I loved it. God, that kiss with Ryan and Liam, I just knew it was gonna be different from the other ones. And when she felt like she couldnt control her body... Hm... something's fishy there as well as the part where Ryan couldnt find the place Cole had shown her...

So apparently Liam and Ryan are over before they even started. Almost same thing with Cole. Ha, now Im comparing them. Somehow, I think Liam will make his appearance again. Who knows, except you ofcourse :)

That part in the creek, when Ryan knelt on the ground and was thinking to herself, I expected for her to suddenly scream or something because Macon's face appeared in the water or something like in the movies.

Okay well fabulous chapter as always.

Your devoted Reader and Reviewer,

Yalina :)

P.s. Whoops Sorry bout the Twilight comparison :)
surrendertomusic chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
Whenever I see the story alert in my inbox for a new chapter, my heart literally stops.

I can't wait til Cole comes back into the picture
RmGonzales chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
I love it :) simple, but good. Poor Ryan. haha
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
I love it, and I can't wait for more!
love this chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
love this story, love ryan, love everything! ahh keep up the good work :)
update chapter 9 . 4/25/2011
Saya chapter 9 . 4/23/2011
Haha. :)

I read this immediately after I commented on your first story.

I must say I find you a brilliant writer.

I am not bery much a writer myself but when I read stories written by such talented people I can't help but want to feel what they feel when they write.

I can tell you that you need not feel insecure. :)

Although writer's block can be a pain, don't let it get to you. I'm sure you'll find inspiration. In everyday life or even when you're dreaming.

Best of luck and I can't wait till you're up and over it.

Have fun writing. :D
StaNdUPtomE chapter 9 . 4/21/2011
obsessing with Cole... dating other guys...

Ryan what are you doing!
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 9 . 4/18/2011
I love it.

It was just the pick me up I need on a really shitty day.
Insanely Random chapter 9 . 4/16/2011
I got on my computer and just knew that you updated without having to check my email.

Anyway, great chapter. Even if you suffer from writer's block (nasty little sucker, isn't is it?) your work is still epically awesome. I stand (or sit) awed because your work is so amazing. It's every writer's dream to write like you do.

Well, I do have to go. I had A LOT of caffine today and I'm currently crashing. My mom predicts that I will wake up at four and start running around the house. Seriously, it's not all unlikely since I had, like, two bottles of Dr. Pepper, and I just can't stop typing. OH MY GOD! FINGERS, BE STILL!
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