|Reviews for Smolder|
| musicalfishieXD chapter 9 . 4/16/2011
So, this story is looking good. I'm glad cole is back, at least a little. I think liam is lying about being human. I want you to update again soon. I hope life gets better and writers block goes away. Update soon :)
| Yalina chapter 9 . 4/16/2011
Oh yes, FictionPress has been a hassle lately. Definitely.
I really liked this chapter. I loved how you compared Cole and Liam. All this time, Ive tried to find a words for and there it is: Fire and Ice. Complete opposites. It's kind of like the Twilight Love Triangle. Edward Cole. Jacob Liam.
If or when Ryan and Liam kiss again, Im curious how it would turn out again.
Oh god, towards the dream, things were getting good. A little foreboding there for sure. When the name Macon was mentioned, I immediately went back to all the other dreams Ryan had experienced which actually HAPPENED so... wow... Poor Macon.
Im really curious bout that frost on the window though... While I was reading it, I was just kinda rubbing my chin and going "Hm... Interesting..." Haha, well cant wait to see what happens with that.
Marvelous chapter as always. Even when theres no Cole, you got me hooked.
Your devoted Reader and Reviewer,
| deactivated20172203 chapter 9 . 4/16/2011
Awesome chapter :) I loved the whole banter about the key lime, and its great having an English character like Liam...I feel I can relate to him since he's the same nationality as me...which is probably really weird of me :L Anyway, amazing as usual, I can't wait till chapter nine :D
- Hearts x
| RmGonzales chapter 9 . 4/16/2011
Fictionpress has been acting like a total ass. I love the chapter, I can't wait to find out more!
| mailey chapter 8 . 4/13/2011
liam's got his perks. he's growing on me, but i feel like there's way more to him than you're telling us yet.
| Nutso Crazy Cookie Fan GirlBoy chapter 8 . 4/12/2011
OMG! I cannot thank you enough for enjoying writing this! Ok, that last sentence didn't make any sense, did it... Well: when an author enjoys writing a story, their love for the story is put down on paper, giving it a 'spark' (at least, that's what I call it). Your characters are amazing- I'm having a hard time knowing what the plot is going to be the more I read, & right now I want to give you all the hugs & kisses you deserve for writing a story that belongs in the publisher's office -as well as
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 8 . 4/11/2011
Cute chapter, she's using him... bad Ryan, all confused and unsure
| surrendertomusic chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
can't wait for more :D
| Insanely Random chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
Thank God you didn't give up! This chapter was amazing! This story seems to grow better with each chapter! Ryan is a great character, and is very lovable! I have to say it, you made me love Liam. He is freakin' awesome.
| Yalina chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
Well I loved it. Not even FictionPress can keep me from reading this story :) With Liam, Hm... I like Liam. He's comfortable and safe and right now, that's something Ryan needs. This was such a sweet chapter. Something different and... fluff filled. I could actually imagine Liam and Ryan in that place and them kind of experiencing something new together. It was a nice change from the usual chapters and I liked it. Im cautious about Liam though, did he really bring someone else to that restaurant before? Who was that yelling in the background when Ryan called him? Hm... There's something fishy here. After all that Ryan has gone through with the supernatural, she should know to question and not ignore thoughts. And I actually live in Miami, Florida :)
Well, great chapter like always. Update soon. We'll be waiting for what awaits Liam, Ryan, Cole and all that other juicy stuff.
Your devoted reader and reviewer,
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
I love it!
| RmGonzales chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
love it but i hope she doesnt settle for liam. cuz i love cole for her. lol
| lou chapter 7 . 4/3/2011
I'm obsessed with this story already. You're awesome. I love your work.
| bumbleB825 chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
I love how you write this and make it so real that I'm pretty sure my heart just literally aches for Cole and Ryan. I wish I had your talent haha
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
I don't mind the slow pace plot and character development.
I just can't stand the waiting for updates on that account I have no patience.
I do love the update and that it was long with plenty of Cole. It was much appreciated.
Have a good weekend.
Please update soon!