|Reviews for The Genitalia Project|
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 3 . 7/13/2011
i honestly don't think tha song was innocent to begin with...
anyway, i think you did a nice job. the rhyming was great. ...and...know the song is stuck in my head.
"RING AROUND GROUND ZERO / POCKETS FULL OF DEAD HEREOS / EXPLOSION! / EXPLOSION! / WE ALL FALL DOWN!"
keep up th good work, you two.
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
pop song drug references win!
i absolutely love this, first time i've seen something in it's style.
ahahaha, the first line. THE FIRST LINE. god, i love this.
| Tera McCaslin chapter 4 . 3/2/2011
The best part is that I could actually see P!nk singing this song.
| recycle rhymes chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
this is so funny. haha classic drug references to a teeny bop love song. thanks for the great read.
| Tera McCaslin chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
Aww, no, your rhyming was great :]. The only time it really falls out is the "of" in line two. Other than that, I really like the nursery rhyme of it all. This was, of course, a perfect pick for what you did and I love the modernized tragedy of it.
That's probably a way more in-depth and philosophical review than you needed, but hey. C'est la vie. It was good. :]
| madden1010 chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
Hahahaha this was hilarious! I can't wait for the next one :)
| Tera McCaslin chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
This was hysterical. I laughed much at: He says "Baby, something's wrong"
I say "Well damn right, I just noticed that we don't have a bong."
You have the gift of rhythm, which is much more than I can say about my own poetic attempts. Kudos and can't wait for the next part :]
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I love the wa you explained The Genitalia Project. :D It's quite accurate! From one highschool girl in a rural area of eastern Minnesota to another, THIS IS GONNA BE SWELL. :D