I NEED MORE ! can we have a mini series of what Gunner and Vance's life is like now?! PLEASE !

Loved this

this need a little more details to spark imagination. add details like "his eyes rolled back and his hips jerked forward''. to give me and all the other readers more imagery and more aroused by the thought of his getting pleasure.

AHHHHHHH

mwuah

Listen. I haven’t read in so long and I was so engulfed that my 15 year old kept asking what I was doing. When I told her “reading a book” she’d say “dang, you’re still reading that”?! I loved this. So much. More than a lot of things I’ve loved in my life. Thank you.

I know this is many years after you posted it. But man, this was one of the best chapter fics I've ever read! Glad I got to read it all in one sitting. I would have died waiting for new chapters! Anyways, I’m new to this site but am going to try to navigate my way to your other work. This is amazing and I hope you’re still writing and enjoying it!

I don't think I've ever been this obsessed about a book.

I am actually really interested to see how this turns out for him.

well this chapter is very asset to sex and stuff

:) Lol
Love ur writing!

I liked Chapter 1 better but this chapter was good as well. The transitions from one spot to the next are great. It leaves you wanting to read more.

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