Reviews for Drunk Text
Arya Yamamoto chapter 15 . 11/3/2011
Wow I finished reading this fic in like 3 hours straight. Couldn't keep my mind off it. I absolutely love Vance and Gunnar to pieces. They are just so MADE for each other lol! Good fic man! Great fic!
xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 15 . 11/2/2011
That was absolutely gorgeous! I really loved how awkward it was when they both wanted the same thing and they were so cute. I liked the style of it as well :)
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 15 . 11/1/2011
FIIISH! Oohh, I read this a few days ago but couldn't comment because I was on my phone. It's probably a good thing too because I was an emotional mess and would have ended up spamming you like I did before.. (Yeah.. I *ahem* apologise for that.. I don't take unbelievably well written stories that toy with my emotions easily) xD

Haha, seriously, this story has been such a happy pill for me. It seemed like it went by so quickly! The characters are so real to me now, and I always looked forward to this, but here we go. All tied up. ; - ;


Heh.. . I look forward to your NaNoWriMo! Taking part this year, it'll be my second! Wo0t, last years didn't go very well at all but I must say, I'm excited about this year. It's going well-ish already. Better than my attempt last year :'D

Waheey, wishing you luck -
Uncle Rupert chapter 15 . 10/31/2011
that was brilliant. i was a little, ok a lot bummed about what happened with james but gunnar and vance sure made up for that. jon and cara were a cute couple too. yeah,so this is not an insightful review but i am still caught up in the end results. it was good ;p the first chapter would be hard to beat, it really dragged you in and set you up for a wonderful story. thank you for sharing ;) loved it.
prostock69 chapter 12 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 12: Oh Jesus H. Christ! Gunnar finally gets what he wants and he runs from it! Shit.
prostock69 chapter 10 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 10: I like that Gunnar is trying to learn more about Vance. But Vance is still hesitant about letting Gunnar in. Again, I'm dying to know what Vance is thinking here?
prostock69 chapter 9 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 9: I love how cranky Gunnar gets when he hasn't been laid for a while. It's so cute! So they go to a gay bar. And surprise, Vance is there. Still, why hasn't Vance tried to contact Gunnar. I wish I could see his POV on their relationship.
prostock69 chapter 8 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 8: Oh shit, Gunnar is devastated about Vance having a guy over. He's so depressed. I'm so sad for him.

OMFG! This is my favorite line:

By the evening, he is so fed-up with avoiding thinking of Vance that he sits down beside his brother James on the porch swing and says, "Have you ever fucked a guy, James?"

I mean, what a thing to ask your brother! And it doesn't even phase James. Too freaking funny!

He's getting a job and moving in with Jon/Cara. His room is going to be AND he runs into Vance who makes a move when he asks Gunnar, "You gonna be in town this summer?" Vance asks. "I—yeah." "Good." And Gunnar wants to know why but just scurries off. Sweet!
prostock69 chapter 7 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 7: OMG, Gunnar has it BAD. Aversion therapy? LOL!

Archery? He's lost his mind! He's totally smitten with Vance. I find it so interesting that he's never been in love, or really loved anyone (having the over whelming need and feeling of needing to be with someone, thinking about them all the time, and actually caring for their well being.) He totally doesn't know how to handle it. So sweet!

Oh, how interesting that he goes to a party, makes out with a girl and then decides she's not doing it for him. THEN finds a guy he's attracted to and blows him in a bedroom and then abandons him and winds up at Vance's door. And not shockingly, Vance has company of the male form.

At first I was upset at Vance. I don't know why because they aren't even dating! And then I sat back and thought about their "relationship" from Vance's POV. Gunnar is a straight man with a girlfriend (Vance doesn't know they broke up) who he thinks is probably just experimenting with him sexually. I think Vance has probably thought about Gunnar alot (even says so.) He probably has feelings for Gunnar but he knows better than to fall for a straight guy. So he remains elusive and does what Gunnar has been trying to do: be with other people in order to keep his mind off of him. However, he totally wasn't expecting Gunnar to show up at his door. He's rather shocked. And I think this is where things will start to change. He now knows that there is more than the need of just having sex on G's side; especially the way that Gunnar just says "oh" and walks away without saying another word.
prostock69 chapter 6 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 6: Mmmmmm, shower sex :)Oh gods, this chapter was so hot. You have a talent, dear, for writing smexy goodness!

Ok, I'm not understanding why telling Vance he's a good kisser was a bad move. I'm very perplexed at that. It's not like he told him he had beautiful eyes. And Vance's response, "Look, Gunnar, I hope I haven't given you the wrong-" perplexed me even more because I didn't take it as Gunnar showing any type of clinginess. He just made a statement.

I find it hilarious that Gunnar thinks he's turning into a girl with his over-thinking, longing for a phone call, etc.
prostock69 chapter 5 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 5: A poetry slam? Really? lol...And they all ended up hating it. Too funny!

How interesting that he turns down a girl but immediately goes home with Vance, who just happens to show up at the party.

Vance is so freaking hot, the way he's teasing Gunnar. And when G responds by saying, "Kiss me now or I'm going to come apart." it made me gasp. Gunnar is totally laying his emotions on the table for Vance. And Vance's response, "What I like about you," Vance says, nudging his nose along the line of Gunnar's jaw, "is how fucking responsive you are. Makes me so hard I can barely breathe." was hotter than hot. These two could burn down the house with their sexual tension.
prostock69 chapter 4 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 4: Gunnar is having feelings and it's making him crazy. I love it! Love will do that to you. He's slowly turning into a chick...that is so funny! And poor Jon, having to endure Gunnar's mood swings. I really enjoyed their exchange regarding Vance. It was so funny!
prostock69 chapter 3 . 10/30/2011
Ch. 3: Super hot chapter! These two have an amazing chemistry. It was nice to get a little info on what makes Gunnar ticked. So he has never been in love or never loved anyone other than his brother. That is very interesting. But I have a feeling Vance is going to change that.
meep chapter 15 . 10/30/2011
Congrats on finishing your fic - it's a nice feeling ;)

Really like your fic, the list making made me laugh.

Good luck with your nano fic.
prostock69 chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
Ch. 2: Gunnar is a hoot! Asking some strange girl on the bus if he looks gay. I nearly choked on my water when I read that. Seriously funny.

Whew, he picked the right coffee house. And their interaction was incredibly hot. The sexual tension between them could have been cut with a chainsaw.

Favorite line:

"Dunno. How often do you tell gay men you'll die if they don't fuck you against the wall right this goddamned minute? And for the record, it was your bed."

"I said that?"

"Among other things," Vance says, clearly amused.
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