Reviews for Drunk Text
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 15 . 8/19/2012
Dum dum dum...and I'm done! Very adorable. You know, I think I enjoyed the latter chapters more than the earlier ones. Maybe you got better or maybe I got more into it or...well, I guess by the end of the we're-just-having-sex-and-nothing-else phase I was REALLY ready for that to be over. I mean, I love sex as much as the next person, but I was desperate for some emotional attachment to really start showing itself by the time it did.

So. Very nice. Thanks for the read! :)

- Moonstar
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 9 . 8/19/2012
"People!" Jon shouts, "Plenty of people. With, uh, orifices."

Every chapter. EVERY chapter, he's going to say something that makes me laugh and want to hug him. Or you know, maul him. With love. Obviously. Also, I still feel guilty for thinking rimming is sexy. But whatever. Guilty desire is that much sweeter...or something. Nice chap.

- Moonstar
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 7 . 8/19/2012
"And then it's worse because Jon says, 'Nice arms,' before diving in and sticking his tongue in Cara's mouth."

Have I mentioned that I love Jon? I'd say "Poor Gunnar..." but I saw that coming and I still feel like he deserves it anyway. Just a LITTLE knife twisting; he's broken enough hearts to have earned feeling it a little.

- Moonstar
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 6 . 8/19/2012
I love how...oh, god, what's the word...eccentric? Gunnar is? With the lists, mostly. He's a whole bunch of things at once, but I think his make-a-list-to-calm-down habit is probably far and away the cutest. I approve of his list titles, too.

- Moonstar
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
Changed my mind. Partly. Well...Gunnar might still be a bit of an ass, but he is a hilareous ass. I love his voice (as the narrator, that is). His "fantasy" loop had me laughing out loud, full blown. Very nice. Poor Jon. (I like Jon; I think I have a weakness for nerdy guys who have no idea they make themselves look gay but aren't. Gay, that is.)

- Moonstar
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Heh, so I've finally decided to try this story (I mean, it's complete and it's popular, why the heck not?) and Gunnar is an ass. I kind of want to feel bad for Mystery Guy, but from what Gunnar remembers of him so far, maybe MG can handle himself well enough. Guess I'll have to see. DO feel sorry for G's girlfriend, though...if he was gonna dump her like that, though, I'm sure she'll find someone better for her.

And onward I go...

- Moonstar
Lovably Insane chapter 15 . 8/9/2012
This is freaking amazing!
hotaru89 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Just finished this and I absolutely loved it. Just stumbled across it and I'm really glad I did. I loved it so much..and I really like your writing style. Going to read everything else on your page now :)
starryeyeddaydreamer9 chapter 15 . 7/18/2012
Fully enjoyed it :) you should get write an epilogue one shot !
PinkHart chapter 15 . 7/10/2012
I really wish you got into it more with Gunnar and his brother James. I mean, James obviously had a problem, and always has had a problem but Gunnar didnt have that problem. Like.. the reason Gunnar wasn't a person who didnt consider that he really loved anyone was because he thought he took after James, not because he really didnt love anyone but because he copied Jame's attitude about life. But James was seriously not ok, maybe he had a disorder or something. I think thats why Gunnar didn't know what to do when he started to fall, because James most likely wouldn't have fallen for anyone and actually stay in love after getting to know them in his entire life. He didnt love Gunnar and he didnt love his parents, which is how he can die one day and not be noticed instantly. I just want to know what his deal was. Did he know he was killing himself? Was he putting himself out of his misery? Did he just want to get high an didnt realize too many pill would kill him? but thats just how Ive been thinking this whole time, I might be so totally wrong & you think Im an idiot :P

kinda reminds me of a story I read about a boy who wanted a stray dog, when his parents wanted to get him a dog from the store, he got mad, he wanted the stray, and then the parents got him a dog that looked like the stray and he was pissed about it. The thing was.. he didnt want a pet, he wanted a dog that didnt give a shit about him, just wanted the stray to come to him when it was hungry. but even if he had the stray, it would become his pet anyway.. or..errr... I kinda forgot where I was going with that. if you get what Im saying, I think we could be best friends

back to the story, it was so sexy and good!. Vance reminds me of Harper though, which isnt a bad thing :) I know this story was more from Gunnar's point of view but I wanted to get to know Vance even more. Like, why didnt he want a relationship? Why did he have hot sex with a guy and not mention his name but still text him?

I loved the parts are with Jon and Cara, I just really like them as supporting characters. Them getting married at the end was nice too. They were really good friends to Gunnar.

also, while reading, I kept thinking 'Gunther' instead of 'Gunnar' lol. I knew I was reading Gunnar, but Gunther was what my brain kept saying. I eventually got it right though... a few chapters in _

ummm, I know theres more I want to say..., ya know, besides typing out "I love this story" over and over again... But I cant think of it :\

If I remember, I'll come back and tell you!
xoxo
Seretei chapter 15 . 7/2/2012
Gunnar is hilarious. I love the way he makes lists and does everything so deliberately to be cool. I also love the way it takes him a while to allow himself to realize and articulate his feelings. However, I must admit my favorite thing about this story is how sexy Gunnar and Vance are together; their relationship is so wonderfully erotic in words and actions. I was way too happy when they both finally got together as a couple on the emotional plane after already being together physically.
goudacheese chapter 15 . 6/9/2012
I couldn't read this story enough okay oh my god I just I don't know how many times I've reread it by now and I could go over and over again and

I don't know it just had everything you know? It had the fluff and the porn and the comedy and enough angst without being too obnoxiously angsty

and Jesus Christ okay Gunnar is hilarious and I absolutely adore him way too much

and Vance of course

AND CARA AND JON I was literally ecstatic about their engagement it's kind of embarrassing actually I think I was happier than them

Sometimes it's hard to make the secondary characters so lovable but you did a perfect job

and everybody's character growth and relationship growth and just how they all GREW okay it was

You did an amazing job

I love everything you write basically but I think this might be my favorite :-)

Bookmarked for the rest of my life

:-)
Emerald Dragon77 chapter 15 . 5/30/2012
This makes me happy! Also, I kinda think you're a genius. Love it!
FullMetalCrayon chapter 15 . 4/29/2012
OMGOMGOMGOMG.

This.

Like this right here.

This story is one of the best I've ever read. And I don't even LIKE romance. That much. Unless it's slash. Which this is. And now I'm going to stop speaking in sentence fragments and get on with it.

It was fluffy enough without being too ...squicky and angsty enough without making me reach for a tissue except the chapter where the buried James because that was sad. It had a good story with an ending that drives me crazy (I like endings that drive me crazy. Which is weird.) and it's just all around a good story and kudos to you, mr./ms. author lady/man for the good work and *squee*

I think I've run out of air so if you could just give me a minute..

Anyway, this story is a diamond among sapphires and you should be proud of yourself!

With love and much fangirliness,

FullMetalCrayon

PS- You said you've never finished a chapter fic before, so congrats. And also, though, I've never finished a chapter fic before (maybe because they're bad or maybe because I'm lazy or both, who knows) and if you could give me some advice I'd be so happy that I might just tackle you like a horny Gunnar would tackle Vance. Except without the horny part. Unless you're into that.

I kid, I kid. Anyway, this review is too damn long and this story made me too damn happy.

Toodleoo!
enblack chapter 15 . 4/26/2012
witty, well-woven, wonderful read. Gunnar's slightly neurotic character was really entertaining.
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