Reviews for Drunk Text
PinkHart chapter 15 . 7/10/2012
I really wish you got into it more with Gunnar and his brother James. I mean, James obviously had a problem, and always has had a problem but Gunnar didnt have that problem. Like.. the reason Gunnar wasn't a person who didnt consider that he really loved anyone was because he thought he took after James, not because he really didnt love anyone but because he copied Jame's attitude about life. But James was seriously not ok, maybe he had a disorder or something. I think thats why Gunnar didn't know what to do when he started to fall, because James most likely wouldn't have fallen for anyone and actually stay in love after getting to know them in his entire life. He didnt love Gunnar and he didnt love his parents, which is how he can die one day and not be noticed instantly. I just want to know what his deal was. Did he know he was killing himself? Was he putting himself out of his misery? Did he just want to get high an didnt realize too many pill would kill him? but thats just how Ive been thinking this whole time, I might be so totally wrong & you think Im an idiot :P

kinda reminds me of a story I read about a boy who wanted a stray dog, when his parents wanted to get him a dog from the store, he got mad, he wanted the stray, and then the parents got him a dog that looked like the stray and he was pissed about it. The thing was.. he didnt want a pet, he wanted a dog that didnt give a shit about him, just wanted the stray to come to him when it was hungry. but even if he had the stray, it would become his pet anyway.. or..errr... I kinda forgot where I was going with that. if you get what Im saying, I think we could be best friends

back to the story, it was so sexy and good!. Vance reminds me of Harper though, which isnt a bad thing :) I know this story was more from Gunnar's point of view but I wanted to get to know Vance even more. Like, why didnt he want a relationship? Why did he have hot sex with a guy and not mention his name but still text him?

I loved the parts are with Jon and Cara, I just really like them as supporting characters. Them getting married at the end was nice too. They were really good friends to Gunnar.

also, while reading, I kept thinking 'Gunther' instead of 'Gunnar' lol. I knew I was reading Gunnar, but Gunther was what my brain kept saying. I eventually got it right though... a few chapters in _

ummm, I know theres more I want to say..., ya know, besides typing out "I love this story" over and over again... But I cant think of it :\

If I remember, I'll come back and tell you!
xoxo
Seretei chapter 15 . 7/2/2012
Gunnar is hilarious. I love the way he makes lists and does everything so deliberately to be cool. I also love the way it takes him a while to allow himself to realize and articulate his feelings. However, I must admit my favorite thing about this story is how sexy Gunnar and Vance are together; their relationship is so wonderfully erotic in words and actions. I was way too happy when they both finally got together as a couple on the emotional plane after already being together physically.
goudacheese chapter 15 . 6/9/2012
I couldn't read this story enough okay oh my god I just I don't know how many times I've reread it by now and I could go over and over again and

I don't know it just had everything you know? It had the fluff and the porn and the comedy and enough angst without being too obnoxiously angsty

and Jesus Christ okay Gunnar is hilarious and I absolutely adore him way too much

and Vance of course

AND CARA AND JON I was literally ecstatic about their engagement it's kind of embarrassing actually I think I was happier than them

Sometimes it's hard to make the secondary characters so lovable but you did a perfect job

and everybody's character growth and relationship growth and just how they all GREW okay it was

You did an amazing job

I love everything you write basically but I think this might be my favorite :-)

Bookmarked for the rest of my life

:-)
Emerald Dragon77 chapter 15 . 5/30/2012
This makes me happy! Also, I kinda think you're a genius. Love it!
FullMetalCrayon chapter 15 . 4/29/2012
OMGOMGOMGOMG.

This.

Like this right here.

This story is one of the best I've ever read. And I don't even LIKE romance. That much. Unless it's slash. Which this is. And now I'm going to stop speaking in sentence fragments and get on with it.

It was fluffy enough without being too ...squicky and angsty enough without making me reach for a tissue except the chapter where the buried James because that was sad. It had a good story with an ending that drives me crazy (I like endings that drive me crazy. Which is weird.) and it's just all around a good story and kudos to you, mr./ms. author lady/man for the good work and *squee*

I think I've run out of air so if you could just give me a minute..

Anyway, this story is a diamond among sapphires and you should be proud of yourself!

With love and much fangirliness,

FullMetalCrayon

PS- You said you've never finished a chapter fic before, so congrats. And also, though, I've never finished a chapter fic before (maybe because they're bad or maybe because I'm lazy or both, who knows) and if you could give me some advice I'd be so happy that I might just tackle you like a horny Gunnar would tackle Vance. Except without the horny part. Unless you're into that.

I kid, I kid. Anyway, this review is too damn long and this story made me too damn happy.

Toodleoo!
enblack chapter 15 . 4/26/2012
witty, well-woven, wonderful read. Gunnar's slightly neurotic character was really entertaining.
bbbee chapter 15 . 3/31/2012
I was utterly charmed by this story. Great characters and great writing. I think you should try to publish your writing in the future, it defenitely has the potential to sell! :)

hugs
lknots chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Found this through someones updates on Goodreads. Read all through. Liked a lot! Especially the drunken ramblings :) Thank you for writing!
SandraMyfictionnook.com chapter 15 . 3/27/2012
Hi,

stumbled over this on Goodreads on a friend's profile. Some kind soul put this up and I came right over after reading the blurb and read this story in an afternoon.

And loved it. LOVED IT! Why isn't this published? Gunnar was adorkable as he stumbled through not only figuring out his sexuality but also how to maneuver his way in and around a relationship with a guy who's just as commitment-shy. This was FANTASTIC. I'll be posting a review on GR as well, if you want to come by and check that out!

Thank you for sharing!

Sandra
moggy chapter 15 . 3/24/2012
this is the first time i've been on fictionpress, and i am so glad your story is the first i fell on. your writing is fantastic, the way you get emotions across is incredible! i love this story and really enjoy your writing style! (i cant seem to get down how excited i truly am about your writing)! and now i'm off to hunt through the rest of your stories! thank you for putting your wonderful creations on the tinterweb!
SilenceInHonour chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Well, I haven't read the whole chapter yet but... genius line: "Well, apparently, I was fucking a guy into my mattress and doing something else that involved finger painting. You?"

That's definitely going in my 'favourite lines of all time' list. *still laughing*

~Silly (SilenceAsIScream)
LoriSK chapter 15 . 2/27/2012
Really enjoyed your story!
tell it to the sky chapter 15 . 2/9/2012
love this. Gunnar and Vance are so cute together.
Honunjama chapter 15 . 2/7/2012
Really enjoyed this

I think that paragraph with Gunnar thinking 'I love you I love you I love you' and then Vance's response is one of my favorites in the whole world.

Thanks so much for posting this

Suki .
Honunjama chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
Oh my fucking god you're awesome! I love this story, I love Gunnar, I can't wait to read the rest
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