|Reviews for Drunk Text|
| Initially loaded chapter 12 . 9/26/2011
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO. love the way this develops.
| MyLifeSoundtrack chapter 12 . 9/26/2011
I don't even know where to start. Like, I seriously don't because there were a million little amazing points to this chapter and you update so fucking fast now... incredible! I just woke up and since I'm a glutton for checking all of my internet social outlets, when I saw the update I went there ASAP! And I read it and, you know what. I'm PMS-ing so I cried all emotionally at the end of this chapter and I was like "SERIOUSLY!"
Yep, I was yelling at the screen and my brothers (because we're having a gay sleepover) asked what was wrong and I told them and they just shook their heads and went back to playing the videogame or watching gay porn, whichever. But yea. Onto my review and enough spiel about my daily life/PMS-ing.
First, I totally loved Gunnar's interview and Cara's mom. Her mommy is exactly like my mommy so I was in love with that part of the chapter. Seriously, I'm not even joking. But I loved the interview and I loved Gunnar's list soooooooooooooooo much. It was friggin adorable. He's just- I just- GUH! I love him. This review is probably super awkward right now but I can't help it. I'm emoting all over the place! But yea. Gunnar's interview was stellar and I liked the end of it so much.
The party! Neil is a hoe fo sho but I loved his use in making Vance all jealous and relationship-y. I so loved Gunnar's loves confession monologue while he was drunk. Damn that kid has a set of balls on him when he's drunk. His babbling about being teammates and bar mitz fahs (sp?) and just everything was too cute. And good for him, standing his ground on not fucking until they were some kind of committed...
But then he totes fucked it up by running out of the apartment after getting some ass. Love is such a scary thing isn't it? Poor Gunnar. And I think I can guess what happens next... kind of. I have an inkling of a clue. But damn... Vance and his sexy and Gunnar and his sexy and I just love your writing style so friggin much that it's ridic.
I could never write in close third because it would drive me insane. It has. But you do it like a boss and I envy your skill. The sex was hot btw. Really, seriously, deleriously hot. I have a kink for couples who cum together cuz there's just so much intimacy involved in those scenes and you can tell that that's when things have shifted in their relationship... so awesome. Kudos to you hun.
Amazing chapter and I'll be waiting for the next one which I'll assume won't be too far away seeing as you're on a roll.
Steamy canvasy-paint sex! I already has ideas for that too. Vance and Dalton would be in for a treat. And Brendon could totally occupy Gunnar in the meantime so that things are even.
I'm glad you're liking the stuff I sent you. I mean, Arynn's story is so ancient and needs tons of work but I still liked the whimsical idea of the whole thing and it's quick/easy to read and go through. But there are soooooooooooooo many characters (and I could name them all and describe them sadly). But I can wait to hear what you think. I'm just glad you're liking it.
As for RAZOR... I have like 4000 words written but the chapters are usually longer but I think I could wrap it up... should I just post it? It's short but, well... Maybe I will. It's an important one so I guess it'd be find if it's short. Whatever. Maybe by the end of this week it'll be up.
Anyway, lovely chapter, as per usual, and I can't wait until you update.
| Malaia chapter 12 . 9/26/2011
I just want to say, after reading most of this chapter, I feel like this:
~And Gunnar starts feeling like he does after he's spent the whole day at the pool and he can still feel the waves cresting over him when he's out of the water, later, hot and dry under the sun.~
I don't need to say anything else. Do I?
| Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 12 . 9/26/2011
I LOVE a drunk Gunner. He's so funny and so adorable! SQUEE! But woah. Vance gives and and then Gunner leaves? then again, I can kinda understand...ish lol.
Great chapter (with a jealous Vince WOOH!) please update soon! :D
| Elira Winter chapter 12 . 9/25/2011
At the middle of the chapter, I was all like PROGRESS! SUCCESS! And then Gunnar happened.
- facedesk -
| Hayonushi Takintoshiba chapter 12 . 9/25/2011
It was sooo difficult attempting to read the drunk talk. But I managed it!
There was one line where you said "... that picture of me and Cara fucking..." (And then went on to explain that cara fucking SAID something, but seriously, I was like:
Anyway, great chapter and I appreciated the length, but you might have to have a stern word with your characters about getting to the sickeningly lovey-dovey bit already XD
| Fumiki chapter 12 . 9/25/2011
Vance is jealous! But poor him, does Gunnar really have to go right after they have sex? I know he freak out and all, but still... ah well, I'll just wait for the next chapter! :D
| charlie the unicorn chapter 12 . 9/25/2011
| S.H. Marr chapter 12 . 9/25/2011
Awww, poor Vance. That was on its way to so incredibly cute, too.
I hope Gunnar sorts himself out soon.
| neo-chan chapter 11 . 9/25/2011
Seriously, this fic is my drug. I love it sooo much.
| KalinGee chapter 11 . 9/21/2011
"Flattery will get you everywhere,"
- Love it! 3 though I do wish James would make his appearance some time. )
| Mimi chapter 11 . 9/21/2011
Man, that was a comparatively speedy update! And a very enjoyable one at that. I love the budding romance, every little hint at their deeper feelings makes me giddy. Keep it up!
| youths chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
damn, Gunnar's gone bat shit crazy. he's becoming a girl. almost PMSing, really.
and about entering through a left side door, LOL hahaha.
| Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 11 . 9/19/2011
You're too amazing for words. I LOVE THOSE TOO SO MUCH! And it confuses me to read this bloody story. I can't tell what Vance waanntts, but Gunnar is getting so freaking cute :D
| youths chapter 3 . 9/19/2011
lol, I started wondering if Gunnar was a sociopath or something... and it started reminding me of Clinard's theory, but whatever.
his love for his brother sure is something, but sad in a way. I mean, I'd rather be given affection when the giver actually means it, not because I'm staring hungrily and need it. I really like that tidbit you fed us-that, and the smut, ha ha ha. :)