I loved reading the story, it was really good but maybe you should add a sequel. Great story. :)

This is actually pretty good, it moves too fast in some area's. The best thing you could do for this story is to drag it out more, there's 31 chapters but only 21K words (I think it might be more or less but its around there). Just drag it out on the days shes not with Alex. And you should drag out the part where she's home and she's mirisable without him, she can't eat anything her maid brings her, just something :)

:) Check out a few of my stories if you want, none of them are finished though :)

Doryy(: