Reviews for Gavin: Child Fugitives: June 2027
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
I like Gavin, he seems okay!

And your imagery was very good in this chapter, and the descriptions were done excellently too.

Great job!

StoryMonster
Irish toaster chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Fantastic. I really liked the quality of writing, particularly the pace of the story. You conjoured the imagery so well it was easy to follow and picture the story as it unfolded. I would space out the paragraphs of the children and the rest of the family so as to make the transitions clearer but apart from that it was superb. I can see no inaccuracies Irish-wise ;)