Reviews for Balloon
MinaBlood chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Sooo creepy! I loved it, that and I hate clowns...more like am afraid of them... anyway the story was great and it sent shivers down my spine so thumbs up for that as well
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Bad news: I found a bunch of little things that tug at my inner editor. Normally I wouldn't say anything about it, but your writing is very good and I hate to see minor problems blur the overall picture. You had a great idea and turned it into a very cool story. (I've never been too fond of clowns either) Nice work, keep it up!
Imagination Destination chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Wow...I am officially terrified of clowns now. I will try not to hyperventilate much. This was pretty scary, and now I have a clown-phobia. Sigh...Good story, though.
TazzieChic77 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011

I'll be dreamin of ur wacky clown now.. Lol..

Love the 1st chapter, so hurry up with the next few plz...

xoxo Aunty Pat xoxo
Kobra Kid chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Woah. Clown serial killers? Well, that's an awesome idea! I did like this one-shot. You didn't drag out anything at all, and cut straight to the point. Killer clowns. If my one friend read this, he would cry himself to sleep. He's terrified of clowns. I find them creepy, but I'm not HORRIFIED by them, even after "It". 0.o Anyways, good work! :D

Kobra Kid

P.S. Can you payback via Rise From The Ashes? Thanks!
Golden Waves chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Man that is crepy :S
Lady of romance world88 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Hi. It is so beautiful and scary story I ever read it. And I love it. :) I am wonder why Jenny's mum hate clown so much? *curiously* How old are Jenny and her mum? *curiously* I am glad that Jenny loves balloons so much. :) I am wonder why Jenny's mum told her it is time to go home? *curiously* I am wonder where is Jenny's father? *curiously* What kind of car does Jenny's mum drive? *curiously* Where this story setting in? *curiously* I am wonder where Jenny disappearing to? *curiously* OMG Jenny have blood hands. And there is clown theme music plus the words on the wall. OMG Does clown bite Jenny's mum? Why? *curiously* Its great story. I love it. And keep writing. Don't stop writing. :D This story remind of the movie that call. 'IT'. By the way, I already post the new chapter in my story since friday. Hope that you check out my story when you have time please. Thanks. :) Enjoy my story. :D I'll read your other two stories tonight. :D
RenaeJoy chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
omg! hahaha

loved it curly!

awesome, funny, 'scary' (moreso creepy), awesome, epic, awesome again... P

Write another yeah?
thefluffmysters chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
...This story, this epic (i use that word a lot...clearly), quietly scary story, represents one thig to me: The fact that I hate clowns. lol I would have been SO scared. Probably would'a fainted right there...
xxxlollie96xxx chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
well done sweet heart hope you keep going?

but thanks sweetie i wont be able to sleep tonight you know i hate clowns! and you sent it to me hahaha love you tho babe! xoxox

loveyour midget (: