I would like to say I hate you. You got me so involved in Tristan and Rox and then you cut me off like I'm a drug addict going cold turkey. But you made me cry and you made me laugh. You are an amazing writer and to me they were real.

Oh my gosh. You're back! I am totally going to go follow you over on Wattpad. I loved this story, even if it was, as you claimed, a little unpolished. I loved your style and the story you had to tell. I'm glad you're doing well and still writing and everything. We (your fans) love you! Thanks for the update! And good luck/fun to the writing you do in the future.

So. Bad

HATE THE ENDING! ROXY AND TRISTIAN HAVE TO BE TOGETHER! THIS IS UNFAIR!

Why did Tristen and Roxy not work out? I cried when i got to that part. Its sad,but i'm happy that the Captain is alive even though i still think Tristen and Roxy should have been together

you know what... Its very well written. But this story as captivating as it is ws very annoying, it dragged out too much for me,, I only got half way before I had to stop, don't get me wrong, I love your story, I just can't keep on going knowing, without even finishing that its not going to end well... Its realistic, but at the same time, too much... too much hurt and pain and there is not a big enough break between each heart break, nothing is substantial and it constantly felt like ro and trist are in stasis from chapter 1-22, there is progress, but baby steps, it just feels like a dark spiral of bad luck, bad choices and bad badness, I'm not being a mean or b*tch about this, because I love Ro and Trist, most of all Seth. Ro does everything and anything for those kids. They have grown to feel almost a part of me as I've read, hence me not being able to read any more, I can't handle more hurt, pain and heart break. I just want them all to be happy all the ugliness to go away. And I'm going to imagine that that's what happened from where I stopped reading, I don't want to step over a line or insult your writing, cause that's not what I'm about, just wanted to give an opinion, sometimes in real life happy endings don't happen, a lot of the time they don't, and people settle for the next best thing to it, or a substitute. But characters in a story come alive and some just deserve a happy ending just as much as people do in real life.I'm sorry I couldn't finish it, I want to so badly but I don't think I can handle the turmoil that these unfortunate characters have to go through anymore.

She should jump him. I started reading this story for the sex, but stayed cuz I fell in love with Tristan and Roxy.

Can I please fuck Tristan?

I love Tristan. And Adam. And Foxy. Still confused on the Annie/Roxy thing.

This is so confusing. Who's Annie? And what's wrong with Tracy? And why is Jenna a bitch?

The fuck is her problem? She told him to relax because it's a joke then she freaks out on him for taking her clothes. She hypocritical and kind of a bitch. And now I really don't like her for just leaving and not understanding that Tristan loves her. Bitch. Okay no I spun like Tristan.

She shouldn't be a bitch, she should just accept that Tristan is in love with her.

Awwwww cute. And the whole diagnosed thing is a little confusing. You should explain it. Wait...is he supposed to be Nick Jonas? Oh my god he is! It's the Jonas Brothers! And Moldy Cyrus! Wow.

She's totally attracted to him.

They're seriously falling for each other hard. And Blake's kind of an ass.