Reviews for My Personal Doomsday
TripleMelody chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This is a fantastic first chapter of a highly intriguing and mysterious story!

Your characters are well-developed and the dialogue is excellent.

Your writing is very sophisticated and beautiful, especially in the way you create this world and its characters.

Looking forward to reading future chapters,

~Melody :)
Hey chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
i like the way they talk. older times...

i love this so far! im surprised this doesnt have more reviews? i love your writing. :)