Reviews for My Personal Doomsday
TripleMelody chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This is a fantastic first chapter of a highly intriguing and mysterious story!

Your characters are well-developed and the dialogue is excellent.

Your writing is very sophisticated and beautiful, especially in the way you create this world and its characters.

Looking forward to reading future chapters,

Melody :)
Hey chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
i like the way they talk. older times...

i love this so far! im surprised this doesnt have more reviews? i love your writing. :)