Reviews for all those winters
Ditch of Glass chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
i really liked this! 'wooden comfort for a splintery spine' is one of my favorite rhymes. the structure and flow is great, and i love your word choice. i hope you post more poetry soon!
Alexander Emberson chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
We all feel this way at times. I specifically love the use of the word "pine." I have to admit that the reason for this is because I'd never seen it used outside of trees. So props to you for expanding my vocabulary! You have some stellar rhyming going on, and I had a fleeting feeling the first time through, and I was sure of that feeling the second time. Nicely done!