|Reviews for My Dearly Departed|
| AmazingGrace91 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Hi! So, I just noticed that you put my story "I'm in Love With a Professional Heartbreaker" on your story alert list, and I wanted to say thanks!
When people do stuff like that, I like to look at their profiles and stories (if they have any) just to see what they're like. So...I looked at your summary for this story and read chapter one. And...I couldn't help but notice some really weird similarities between our stories. Now, I'm not accusing you of stealing anything, but I'm extremely overprotective of my stuff, especially since I had someone take stuff from my other story last year.
But...the whole main character's dad dying...them not knowing their mother...they're being raised by a family member who doesn't like them...the last name being Parker...and the dad's name is William Parker, just like the father in my story...kind of freaked me out. Now, the rest of your story doesn't sound very familiar, but still. I just feel a little edgy.
But you did a good job in terms of writing. Like I said, I'm not trying to accuse you of anything, but I'm just a little weirded out and I don't think anyone can blame me with similarities like that.
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so glad that Anne love her sisters so much. And she cook them breakfast plus watch the cartoon together. Yay. :D I am wonder why Rachel treat Anne like slave? *curiously* I am glad that Anne and her dad bouht her a motorcycle. Yay. :D I am so glad that Anne take care of her motorcycle like a baby. :D OMG James cheat on Anne with Lola behind her back. Poor Anne. :( I am glad that Anne walk away from Lola and forget James who hurt her so badly. Yay. :D I am so glad that Anne, Rae, Marcty, Lilith and Aubroe are best friends forever. Yay. :D I am glad that Lilith offer to drive Anne and twins to dance lessons. Yay. :D I am so glad that Anne and the twins share bed together. Yay. :D I am wonder why Anne kept dream about her dad? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anytìng too quickly. :)
| Sly-Thief chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
I just love this story to pieces!It is so good!Seriously.
| Sly-Thief chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
I liked nearly brought a tear to my eye at the end!
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am glad that this story is better than the original story and I love it. :) I notice that you change the summary bit and the male main character name as well. I love it. :D I am wonder what kind of book does Anna read at the moment? *curiously* How old is Anna? *curiously* How does Anna's biological mum die? *curiously* I am sorry to hear that Anna's dad die in hospital from car accident. It must be tough time for Anna and her twins to get cope over him. Poor Anna. :( I am wonder why Rachel treat Anna like a slave and never care or take responsibility over the twin? *curiously* Aww Trinity and Taylor are so beautiful twin and so cute plus adornable girls. :) I am glad that Anna love her twin sisters and do anything to potect them plus make them happy. :D Trinity wet her bed and poor thing. :( Its not Trinity's fault. It happen to little children. Don't worry, Trinity will outgrew it and start to using to pot training soon. :) I am glad that Trinity want to know about her dad and love to talk about him with Anna. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) I definitely will read this story until the end because I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH and I want to know what happen next in this story. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
| ILOVEYOUBIEBER chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
WOW! A wonderful start to what I know is going to be an EXCELLENT story. ;)
I love it, you've captured me with the first chapter.
I can't wait for more!
| TazzieChic77 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I love ur writin. So enjoy readin all ur stories. This copy of My Dearly Departed is so far way different to the 1st copy, but I still love it.. Well done,, Keep up the great writing & upload more chapthers soon..
xoxo U know who :-P xoxo
| Autumn Blaze chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
The description in this version is way better Savage, you better start writing the next chapter quickly before people start going crazy from the wait :D
Only problem is that you sometimes put fullstops at the end of a persons dialogue when it should be a comma,part from that it's awesome as always :D
| RandomReader11 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
This sounds like an excellent story. :)
Great work you've caught me in just the first Chapter!
I'll be keeping an eye out.
| RenaeJoy chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
oi sis, update soon yeah?
have you written anymore from what I last read?
| xxxlollie96xxx chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
i read it before it even got here!
BUT WELL DONE ANNA!
i love this story and want more more more more more
and im sure everyone else will love this story!
keep going your very talented anna!
iloveyou babby girl xoxox
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