Reviews for Vampire life Refixed
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
i'm not very fond of vampire stories as there are millions of them, all revolving around the idea of twilight. however i can see that your writing style has potential.

my advice is to write on something completely original. i know you have it in you to create something that hasn't been done before. don't fall into the vampire story ditch. take the risk!

but anyway, i think you're a very good writer... it's just the topic you chose to write on is unfortunate