Reviews for Sparrow Fire
SweetSarah2 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
This was a really powerful poem. I liked the way you described things, like 'To your eyes -like dusty shop windows, the curtains closed.'
Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
This is incredibly intense. It's great the way you get the reader caught up in the emotion of the character, then bring the reality out only in the last few lines.
Archia chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Every line in here had so much description in it, it's so nice.