Reviews for Mandor in the Water
Esareh chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
It's really hard to believe how much you've grown as a writer after all these years. I kind of want to go back to Quizilla and try to navigate the tides and find that story you wrote on there back in the day to make comparisons. I'm kind of afraid to look at mine, honestly, so maybe I won't be that cruel :P
Mommy ink well chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
That picture was scary. I really like the story. Being that is only one page it still made me not want to put it down. ;)
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Sigh. I really love your writing. It's always amazing.

And the fact that you snuck in romance. Hehe. SO good. I love the made-up names. Although Mandor reminds me of oranges. (Mandarin... oranges...) Which isn't a bad thing. Just a random... y'know... my brain works that way.

That was a really terrible sentence. :D
Avra-Sha Faohla chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Wow. I see what you mean about your total inability to stick to non-romance . . . but it's good. Avra likes the beginning, and Cailin (my girly side) likes the ending. So there's something for both of us . . . me . . . parts of me.

"She was a willowy thing." - I don't think this line was meant to be funny, but I love it and find it strangely amusing.
JustWords chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Wonderful story :D The story fits the picture perfectly, and the romance adds spice xD Awesome made-up-names as well! I totally suck at that, put too much thought into it :P

Cheers!