Reviews for Lance De Vampyre
Joanna.55 chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
I think the idea of this story is really good! :) but you need to slow it down a tad. Everything is just happening so fast. although you might have gotten away with it because its at the start of the story you need to introduce the characters more. :) I did read the comment about this just being fun though and otherwise I think this is an amazing plot so far and I look forward to reading more
CupCake34 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I just want to let you know that this made me laugh! haha good job!
lnik chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
Love it! Even better is that I'm reading this in a limo with cake! Really want to know what happens next... ;)