Reviews for holding hands
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Very sweet poem. I like how descriptive it is, and how real and relatable the feeling is.
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I like the relaxed feeling to your writing :) Your use of language is really good, and I like how you use only a few details to describe a person. I personally prefer punctuation and capital letters in poems, but maybe that's just me :) Great piece!